Dreamweaver: I saw the BB and I will leave my thoughts on there. Fridgeman: The Colors were nice and the linework solid!You did great for the time allotted. Hopefully we see more of Maoumi in the near future!

Fridgeman- these colours are lush. I really like the story you put together, simple but clever. Honestly, this is a great example of a 1-weeker. I look forward to seeing how you grow on the site! Dream weaver- will check out the bb!

Dream weaver: life happens and its great you still mamaged to upload as a bb later. Fridgeman: fantastic colors and panel compositions. I love the composition you did in the last page. One thing you can work on improving is the rythem in the figures: https://youtu.be/fVY5gla0FNQ this is a good video explaining the concept. You should also spend some time with warm up’s practicing proportions since they were slightly inconsistent here. But more importantly you should practice making the body and arm shapes a bit more dynamic and asymmetrical, when they’re symmetrical tubes it looks off and doesn’t seem like something you’re trying to go for.

DREAM WEAVER- I'm sorry you couldn't finish on time, I'll check your BB as soon as I'm able! FRIDGEMAN- The colors in this were gorgeous, it was like cotton candy for my eyes. The way the 'water' ripples broke into the page was so sophisticated; paired with the clashing colors and patterns... it was so artistic and beautiful. I'd love to see more of your work soon!

very nicely don't on both of they're great! First off pleasantly surprised how each of you approached your opponents very creative. Secondly, both of your art styles are really spectacular as well and a real treat to see. Dream I share everyone else feeling on this and am really sorry that you missed the turn in I can see you put a lot of heart into this one. amazing work! Fridgeman I loved the colors and the shot of the inside of the cup is amazingly well done!

Dream Weaver- Glad you were able to upload later, I'm gonna go through and read yourside. Fridgeman- Really enjoyed the tripy look of that final page!

Dream Weaver - thats unfortunate that you didn't make it, but it will be cool to see you in action still! Fridgeman - i really like the composition on the third page, good job overall! also great voiders references on the first page hehe

Welcome to Void! DREAMWEAVER: We all know life happens and we still support and root for you, when you're ready again you'll have readers excited to see what you've got. FRIDGEMAN: A tale as eclectic as Maoumi, page 3 is a visual treat for the most part. The dark blue empty space leaves me wanting for more of the intricate designs appearing in the rest of that page. You have good color theory chops and it's great to see you aren't afraid of filling pages up with background material otherwise. Whatever notes I may give I'm sure are things you'll learn and get on your own with more comics, crits from other members, and observation and learning on your part.

I'm sorry for what happened, Dream. I know you will have better luck next time :+1: Fridge, I love that you kept the comic short and brief. The colors are great and the circular panels look cool as hell :wowza: I would love to see more of Maoumi's tea :eye:

Dream- Stick around, hope to see what you had planned Fridgeman- the colors in this are great and the details like the brick wall and in those circular borders are great. Very readable and stylish and i like your simple well-placed word bubbles, good stuff. Let's battle soon!

Circular panels my beloved... Especially when they radiate out as the effects of the tea kick in. Lovely palette as well

Fridgeman this had a really pleasing color palette and great character interaction. I loved with Maoumi first just appeared behind Jiames and the last page with the symbolic soul representations...really good

Dream I'm so sorry life screwed you over on your end. I hope you can re-submit it as a beyond battle like others have said. I will look forward to it. Fridge: Jiames is an uncultured swine and ungrateful turd, fie on him.