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Speed Dating 2022, Final Round
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Rikun
I had so many ideas for this one, but time got away from me and I wish I could've done more. Maybe next time.
Open to any comments or critiques
This comic has been rated suitable for all ages by its creator(s)
Uploaded March 07, 2022
Comments (8)
Goldie
I can't get over how much I love the way you drew Itami 🥺 All of your characters are super cute and attractive and nice to look at :3 I also don't know if the NPCs in this comic are guest appearances or if you just put enough care into their designs to make them all feel like unique characters in their own right. Both of those are fun! This was such a fun way to wrap up the tournament! I love how you connected this round to the last one in a way that gives the whole tournament a complete feeling to it. Also poor Itami, just wanted to hook up with the hottest babe in town 😔Rikun
You ran some ideas past me trying to make sure the story felt solid, which makes it all the more disappointing that you ended up rushing the story because time "got away from" you. I can't really give any meaningful critique on this, because the problem is just that it was too short for the story it was telling to feel natural. It's just one thing after another with no setup or development. I assume that's just because you had to rush at the last minute instead of being able to work on it over a larger period of time. Ah well. Maybe next time!