snager:
jee, juxta. how come YOUR characters get to have animated graphic design in their brain aps, and mine don't even get a little static when they change to a dead channel in their mind-tv? :(
It is only the price I pay for being a full time designer ^_^;; I ain't letting it go to waste. Thanks!
Reecer6:
I'm super into the possibilities of this little intelligence company narc!! Fantastic work!
Narc!!! Now THAT'S a great word for him!! Thank you ^^
TheCydork:
it’s a really clever (pun fully intended) subversion of a cold, unfeeling entity. Excited to see more!
Hehehehehe hehehehehe hehehe
FrankenToon:
If I wanted to get nitpicky, I would mention that I got a little lost on word bubble placements on the first page, but it could just be that Im just waking up as I write this haha.
YES! This is something I noticed after the fact as well (specifically the 2 on panel 3) I thought I was crazy thinking it was a little awkward but it's good to get another set of eyes on it. I appreciate the feedback, Franken!
And thanks to everyone else's kind comments!! I'm planning to put out more work this year for certain!
This is such pro quality work, I'm floored! You've given me a sense of Clever's personality and worldview, created such a lush and full view of the world around him (including several cameos, which just make things feel so much more real and grounded), and left me intrigued as to what his future comics will be like. I'm just AAAA so excited to see more from this character!!!
WHOA, what an intro- this is so incredible!
Clever is absolutely adorable, from the design, down to his caring, extroverted nature. The string of code also has me curious on the future of his story- he has so much potential for Void, and I cant wait to see!
I dont really have any crits at all. The art was phenomenal, from the backgrounds to the characters, little details like including the void badges for officials and cutesy little voider school uniforms are a great touch. If I wanted to get nitpicky, I would mention that I got a little lost on word bubble placements on the first page, but it could just be that Im just waking up as I write this haha.
All and all, amazing work Juxta, I cant wait to see Clever strut their stuff!
yo this is really good!! I especially love the backgrounds, the attention to detail in them, I could look at them all day tbh! Also love the way you draw expressions, this comic just looks so fantastic you did an awesome job!
The Quality… it’s truly professional levels wow. I loved page 4 too, it was really unexpected and cool! I also love how Clever’s purpose as an AI is linked to his extroverted personality, it’s a really clever (pun fully intended) subversion of a cold, unfeeling entity. Excited to see more!
WOAH this was absolutely INCREDIBLE!! The backrounds, the dialogue, the cameos... I can't find a thing to criticize here, this was such a treat to read! All your comics so far have been outright amazing!
Hi all! Just for some background (and my own records) this intro was started in mid-September and finished in October ^_^; I had some serious analysis paralysis, but finally got the nerve to export and upload. As usual, any feedback is greatly appreciated and thank you to everyone who had helped in his development!
jee, juxta. how come YOUR characters get to have animated graphic design in their brain aps, and mine don't even get a little static when they change to a dead channel in their mind-tv? :(
seriously this is SO sick, I love Clever, he can vacuum my rug any day, sorry roomba, you're fired.
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