This is a cute little comic!I feel like there's a bit more you could've done with that last panel in terms of composition, like maybe pulling the camera back to make it a wider shot, giving us some more of the background and maybe really pumping up the humor of this huge ridiculous sign suddenly blinding everyone. :P Don't be afraid to really go over the top with toons! and don't be afraid to vary up your angles to really punch up the humor!

A very nice introduction to Simon and cool to see how he uses signs as his form of speech. That can lend itself to a lot of cool panel/pose opportunities and I hope to see more of him ^_^

Cute little punchline! I don't really have much to go off of in terms of critique, so I'll just say I look forward to seeing what kind of person Simon is, like his motivations, goals, personality, etc. Nyasuu's reaction at the end is cute 😊

Lovely comic Turtle!! ☺️

Thirded, I had to zoom to 25% to read the comic. This was a cute comic though, nice work.

I forgot to shrink it oops, I really wasn't thinking about that

That was cute! Sadly, yeah, the file seems to be a bit too big!

I think the page is a bit to large. Had to zoom out pretty far for it