Murder that is sad Then. Murder that is slow and cruel. This was a good match up for all the people who want to see cute things die.

so sad both comics UnU good work on that both of you haha Flytee: I didn't even think about the bad luck element until Cy mentioned it, while it's interesting to see a more subtle representation of the bad omen here, I don't know whether it's a better, worse, or neutral way of handling this. I guess this is more an observation than a critique, and if you make it to round 2 it would be worth experimenting I think.

Flytee: So characterful, lovely colours and atmosphere throughout. Bottom left panel on the first page has some slightly confusing perspective. Buggy: So sad. Everything read super clearly even in the sketch phase.

Buggy - Very clear story despite being in an early stage, good job. My pencils are an illegible nightmare haha Flytee - NOOOO ToT You drew Gizmo so cute, also loved the expressions and eye mask you gave yourself. I feel like the bad luck here was more subtle than the last comic, which was a cool contrast too!

Flytee: Wow. Cold blood murder. Nice. Buggy: went dark rapidly O-O

Buggy yours is sad but it's still very readable, good job making a cohesive story with what little time you had Flytee i like this, it's odd that torca doesnt seem to really care or notice that giszmo is gonna get killed, but i like his sittin' back relaxin' pose on page 2.

Flytee, you're a straight up murderer and I'm here for it. I always adore your art and this story was such a fun one to read. Buggy, what you had was cute, I'm sorry you weren't able to do more with it!

Very cute, both rounds! Buggy's was heartbreaking and cute, while Flytee's was...very funny, unfortunate and still adorable! Really loved the way Gizmo tried to get their way with them big ol' eyes Great job you two!!

UUUUURRRRRK THE CUTENESS