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Light Speed Death Tournament 2021, Round 1
TRIGGER WARNING!!! Page 2 contains horror imagery, although distorted. Overall, beware of violence and light gore.
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TheCydork
All-Rounder
2 years ago
Franken, this got my best kill vote. Still holds up, super creative and dramatic.
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Footini
All-Rounder
3 years ago
Franken: my favorite kill this round. Boogidi: this is such a wacked character I love it. please do more
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Kilcra
All-Rounder
3 years ago
Y'all are crazy, this battle was intense!! Ridiculously great work from both artists! Between Franken's stellar and polished style and Boogi's insane writing and clever comedy, its really hard to choose who won this!
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Gregly
All-Rounder
3 years ago
Franken- the art in these pages is great and I like how red and crazy it gets at the end-- I'd just say watch out for making your pages extra tall, this kind of ended up being six pages.. I just know people have been called on that before Boogidi- whoa he chopped her head clean off! The backgrounds in this are really cool I like the dense city and it doesn't distract too much. The 'stroke order' joke made me laugh, too
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TheCydork
All-Rounder
3 years ago
Franken - LOVE the imagery on page 2 and 3! Bright with noise and spot blacks is a choice look. Really dramatic, the SFX when Scav shot herself was really well done too, I see a tortured face in the letters. I think the flow could be better though; the panel and dialogue placement is quite clunky in some places, and reading order isn’t intuitive, like the top of page 3. Speaking of dialogue though, Scav has a really clear voice and you did a good job establishing her personality here. Boogi - This was such a fun battle, I love how K4Kill needs to be cut in the correct stroke order, that’s really creative. The backgrounds you included here were also super good, the perspective on the first two panels is *chef’s kiss*. Not really sure what’s happening in the first and last panels on page 2 though.
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FrankenToon
Inker
3 years ago
Thank you so much to everyone for the very useful crits and compliments!! This has been super fun to work on, and Im so happy that many have enjoyed what I was able to dish out. AND THANK YOU TO BOOGIDI FOR AN AMAZING BATTLE!! Boogs, I absolutely adored how badass and hot you portrayed Scav, and the whole thing from beginning to end was hilarious and a joy to read. I keep coming back to it, you did sucha great job and I'm rlly glad to have faced you!
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BoogidiBzdo
All-Rounder
3 years ago
Whoa! Great job Franken! I was very curious to see what you would do with this Japanese syllabary unit, and i was amazed. That’s a cool looking scary face on page 2, Very impressive work! :)
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Putrid
Colorist
3 years ago
Franken: I am so amazed at what you can do in such little time. Every panel looks like a poster or something, really great clean lines and the use of splash of colors really makes everything pop! I'm in awe with the second page, I keep going back to it! Very very clever way of defeating your opponent! You've shown you can work with even the most abstract of characters! Boogidi: Those backgrounds are insane! the inkwork is very very impressive too! The lines are a little wobbly but I think it works in your favor, since Capn K4kill has that chaotic unhinged energy. Scav's body looks really REALLY good, and Capn' expressions definitely take the cake Great round, you two!!
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Frazzler
All-Rounder
3 years ago
Franken: Wow, well your character drawings are nuts. Especially for the time. Only real thing I'd say is that the backgrounds felt a little clinical. Very, very straight lines- made it feel a little uncanny. Great use of essentially a single colour throughout too! Boogidi: Really fun comic. I like that you've brought such a unique character and are happy to show us what they can do. I think you can minimise your text a little. It could be a lot smaller and just as legible, giving your art more breathing room. Also I can't really see much rhyme or reason between where your linework becomes very thin vs very thick, and it make things feel a little incoherent.
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PyrasTerran
Writer
3 years ago
Both of these comics were very entertaining, bravo Franken: This is a ton of great work for such a short amount of time, and you even got some great technically crafted backgrounds, colossal kudos for the effort. My gripes are with the word balloons in page 1, I don't think the border used for the narration works with the rest of the visuals, and the transparent bubbles almost feel like they were accidentally made that way, I think there's a better way to work those Boogidi: A fun comic that made me laugh! For having so many effects and motion lines etc. though I feel like too many of them were made with roughshod slapdash linework when they would have benefited to the same care you gave to other parts of your pages. As they are now they come out looking pretty rushed Great work everyone!
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FrankenToon
Inker
3 years ago
HELLYESS same!! Tysm for the abstract opponent to work with! I'm so excited for this battle too!
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BoogidiBzdo
All-Rounder
3 years ago
I am almost done, I’m going at lightspeed right now. Very excited for this. :) I am on the last page, page 003 right now It’s gonna be cool!
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