Thanks for giving us this epilgoue. I love Dairyu's coy expressions. They're cute and mischievous at the same time. Dairyu and Rickter is such an odd pair and it's what makes them interesting. They are also both loveable in their own way. Looking forward to more!
Really good stuff, a little nitpick would be that panel 6 on page three I would have suggested that you might want to make the characters a lot smaller maybe even as silluettes, they would have stood out better. sorry. I don't really like giving critiques when not asked but I really liked everything else.😬
I didn’t realise the battle was incomplete djdsjsh but this was nice regardless! You do good monotone and I like the merry dance Dairyu is leading Rickter on haha.
Here we go again.
This is a follow up comic for my battle with Fluff, which you can read here: https://entervoid.com/comic/7350, they were just pages I hadn't finished on time.
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