wow, that was high entertainment value for a 24 hour battle! and such a great Idea for a couple of characters who need to go at it!

People who do 24 hour comics are so brave, good work to the both of you! Buggy - I like what you had, the story seemed really interesting! I wish we could have seen more finished panels, but I love what you had. Diz - I like the poses you used, especially for when Aleyda is in flight, and it looks like your panelling is improving, so good work! I do have a crit and that is that it feels like you made the story first and shoe-horned Evelin in, because she feels very out of character to me in this.

Grats on the 24 hr battle. Buggy, I love where you were going with this. Sorry you didn't get to finish. Your finished sketches were looking good though. I see some improvement from you. Diz - I never thought of putting Aleyda and Evelin against each other but with this fight, it makes perfect sense. I hope to see an ongoing rivalry. Again, grats on you both for jumping in and doing a 24 hr battle. I am not brave enough for this lol.

24hr's are always tough but fun!

Wow....! Awesome.

Haha, yeah you right!

nice try from the both of you for a 24 hr comic, that rush is difficult! buggy: neat to see evelin being evil diz: simple but effective, on page 8 the way the two ladies are drawn relative to the ground made evelin look super tiny lol

I was afraid of that.

Buggy - Interesting hook, in the finished lineart your style also seems to be much more polished. Diz - Pretty solid for a 24 hour comic! Complete story, consistent level of finish, also 11 pages is quite a lot. Crits: Aleyda’s mouth was kinda confusing to me; I think the black part was her bottom lip but it doesn’t always read as such, sometimes seeming more like an open mouth. I’m not sure if this is a hazard of a fairly toony style or if colour would have fixed this though. The blocky standard font for sound effects like “SUMMON” took me out of the comic too.

Hey that was cool. I really like that if you read Buggy first then mine, it could almost be one story!

Time for some good old fashioned sin!

Oh neat! I can't wait to see how this battle turns out!