Good job on the intro, you showcased both Charlamagne’s personality and goals very clearly here! The action was a little hard to follow though - with a limited palette, the criminals were hard to tell apart despite different clothes. Varying up their body types and faces would have helped. Still, a great first attempt, welcome to Void!
Violent and Fast is the only words I can only really think when it comes to this comic. The economic use of color you got here is quite interesting and it really plays up when you have the red glasses or blood on panel it pops. Great job on this one and can't wait to see your first battle here on Void!
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