Aaaa I love this. I love when voiders get so amped off of other members comics that they respond in kind WITH EVEN MORE COMICS. >=D Jozzik calling in King Jack had me =000 !! I'm so excited to see what zany hijinks ensue!

Jozzik's hiatus is over. Excellent scene transition in the middle. Gave the impression that Jozzik is appearing and reappearing like a magician. Casual high levels of power is always amusing. The brush you used for the lines make it kind of look rough and sketchy. Something a little more defined might look neater. There are some instances of tangents on the linework which honestly just requires more time to get through them so that's easy to fix. I do like Jozzik's expressions here, he's much more tooney this time around compared to the battle. The only thing about the story is that I feel this should have been part of something bigger. Single page BBs that just serve as a quick bridge and not much else is just a personal thing I usually don't enjoy since there's usually not much to them. But what's here is written well, we get some neat Jozzik being extra moments and I'd like to see where this goes.

This was a great comic Batty! I really enjoyed the creative page layouts- seeing the scenery literally crumble apart into the puff of pink swirls was great. This truly felt like Jozziks domain. I personally enjoyed the looser more cartoony approach you took to drawing him-it was a fun style! Oh, I also really enjoyed the light shining on Jozziks face in that last panel. Writing-wise- I love where this is going. Crits- I think the smoke looks too solid- lightening up the lines (maybe to dark pink) or just using a more painterly brush can easily prevent this. I have some issues with the blood as well- focusing only on the blood, it looks more like a couple of cans of paint have been knocked over, instead of the result of a violent, animalistic attack- could be worth hunting down some tutorials for this sort of thing.

So glad that Jozzik is not taking what happened at the Rage BB laying down. And King Jack is going to be involved?! I cannot wait for this revenge arc to unfold!

nice to see the follow up of Jozzik from the retribution comic. I like the transition from the stage to his room, good use of the format. also his expressions where really good in this. Crit-wise there are a couple tangents that happen that you should be on the look out for; There's two in his pose standing against the poofy pink magic, one on his tail and the other on his finger. When objects get that close it's best to readjust them so there is a more clear intersection. The brush choice you used here I like for the backgrounds, it gives off a toony feel which is what I think you were going for, but you should use a cleaner brush for the characters to help them stand out and feel more solid.

First of all, it’s super cool to see you take ideas from the Rage and run with it! Also cool to see you try out a web scroll comic, I like how the stage dissolved away into Jozzik’s room. Love seeing more of him, his expressions were great here and I enjoyed the palette too! Crit-wise, the lines look really rushed to me and are pretty wobbly for both Jozzik and the background. It kind of looks like you used the sketch/first pass.

Jozzik's getting his revenge!

Note: this is directly following the events of Rage: A Retribution Side Story https://entervoid.com/comic/7180 so if you're not already familiar with that I'd recommend reading it!! :3

With a title like that, you KNOW it’s gonna be good > : )

Yes young Jozzik Let the rage flow through you!