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Golem Time!
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Rivana
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3 years ago
AAAH I missed the voting window but I just want you to know I absolutely love your comic. I am noticing that your coloring style is looking less 'flat' (for lack of better term) and I love it. The color choices you made is very pleasing and the humor/script is really good! What a great 2nd intro for Nagore. I honestly think she'll fit just fine in the craziness that is Void City :D
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Putrid
Colorist
3 years ago
Ellie is so precious oh my Goddd. It's very sweet that Ramunas knows their worshipper's names, too! Even if Nagore couldn't be bothered to learn their names lmaoo. Your art style is so neat and tidy, but full of movement and life, I can't get enough of it. I'm itching to get to know more about these two and what sort of troubles they'll get into!
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ArtsandGoodies
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3 years ago
These two are a great pair and I'm really interested to see what nagore means by the fact the other guys are just toying with them and sending weak golems. Would be a cool thing to see her in future comics having to deal with stronger golems maybe implementing other people's characters into them.
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Kozispoon
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3 years ago
I'm not gonna lie, I highkey just want this to keep going. To be a webcomic I follow to see what hijinks these two get up to. I just really like the dynamic you've established between Father and daughter that I sort of don't want them to get into battles?? Because I just wanna see more of them??
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Flytee
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3 years ago
Just swinging by to gush about your comic. The art is so fun and REALLY well-drawn and Your writing is entertaining as always, I love all the bantering and one-liners you sprinkle into your scripts. Yeah, I don't have any crits for you. Signed your fangirl, Flytee owo
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TheCydork
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3 years ago
Petrichor: Sorry this one looks a little rougher than the intro. I've lost the original psd files when my pc went corrupt so my only choice was to draw over the png files i had saved and the lower quality is quite visible in some panels because of that asjhfgjash. Oh and it is indeed like a second part to the intro, i just wanted to introduce the concept of golems and show more about the characters since there isn't much of it in the intro.
Oh shoot! That really sucks, I'm sorry about your computer :( That's the fuckin worrrsstt
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Heathen
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3 years ago
It's rare that a void comic makes me laugh, and this one did. I love that it's just more of the intro, heck, just keep going. Make it a whole book. I'll keep reading.
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Petrichor
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3 years ago
Sorry this one looks a little rougher than the intro. I've lost the original psd files when my pc went corrupt so my only choice was to draw over the png files i had saved and the lower quality is quite visible in some panels because of that asjhfgjash. Oh and it is indeed like a second part to the intro, i just wanted to introduce the concept of golems and show more about the characters since there isn't much of it in the intro.
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Camel
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3 years ago
Your strengths in character movements and body language are on display here once again. The amount of character you can mine out of Ramnuas despite him just bein a floating head is very impressive. I absolutely love the first panel on page 5, that stomping movement is so unexpectedly dainty, it really illustrates Nagore's personality well. There are some rendering issues I would address - The explosion on page 4 barely changed the intensity of the shadow and light on the subjects, making it feel a bit weak, same going for the beam at the bottom. Coloring wise, the red touches are pleasant, but this is still a bit low-contrast, similar to your other comics - this time, the overcast atmosphere compliments it, regardless i think it would be a good time to start trying to stretch those values a bit, making your pages pop.
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TheCydork
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3 years ago
I found this BB kind of odd. It's an immediate continuation of Nagore's intro, but for me at least, the intro had a nice conclusive end while this one doesn't, which makes me wonder what point it was trying to get at. The titular golem time is over when it's barely begun, it would have been cool to have more focus on that or see more of it, though it was funny to see Nagore so casually stomp him out of existence. I also liked how you dropped in her job, and the iconic logo of course. Art-wise, most of the panels are headshots or waistups, so try to pull the camera back, and watch your backgrounds. They look overly smooth and the perspective can get pretty funky, like panel 2 page 2. I struggle with the former myself, and I've been told to add texture and little marks everywhere to give the impressions of scuffs and imperfections. Even just little dots on top of the flat colours can make it feel less artificial.
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CandycornRhino
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3 years ago
asdasfdasf IM LOVING NAGORE MORE AND MORE WITH EVERY COMIC. This had just anime energy. You always deliver, keep it upppp.
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Footini
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3 years ago
oooh I just saw this and already excited
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