I have to say you've gotten much better at anatomy, and as much as the anatomy is super exaggerated in this comic, it feels fairly grounded. I think your faces distort in ways that don't quite make sense most of the time, so maybe that's something else you can work on (biggest offender just being eye sizes varying wildly). But gosh I had fun reading this comic and Twalette is such a crazy concept XD. I'm glad you were able to upload this even if it was late!

It's great you were able to submit a BB version of this when you had the chance. The only crit i had is there wasn't enough establishing shots, they seemed to go from place to place without much establishing for it.

I've been waiting to see Twallette in action, seeing Virtua in your style is also wonderful! Glad to see you post this, your comics are always a trip to read!

Good on you for finishing! I like how you shaded the skin here. I usually don’t like the super shiny look, but I think it works here because both characters already have unnaturally coloured skin? Virtua also fits in nicely with your style. The background was very sparse though, either non-existent or pretty featureless when it was actually drawn in. The panelling on page 3 was also confusing, I wasn’t sure which I was supposed to read first.

Ohohohoh that was awesome! >w< Prettygud seeing this finished! Great job on this hah! Love Virtua in this!

Twalette is so dramatic lol, i love her the colors/greytones are looking great here! good job finishing this battle boogidi.

I'm scared of VIrtua and Twalette now.

I was haunted by my default on this battle, so I decided to finish it as a BB. Here you get to learn a little bit more of Twalette, her journey;her quest. Still finishing the last few pages... it will be done soon. :) Initially i was going to keep it all b/w, but then I felt the urge to color it, so the first bits are b/w, then the rest is full-color.