sunrise: I love Tam's story and what you are doing with her. The alternate setting of void is pretty interesting, however i do think you should fine some ways to explain it a bit more as it's clearly different from regular void, but really interesting. Lefrara: Sucks you got sick and I hope you feel better, what you had here is nice and i'm looking forward to seeing it all as a BB.

Sunrise- I realy like the look of this comic and the way Tam stands out on the pages. The action sequence busting in and fighting up the stairs is quick and violent and awesome and the consistent backgrounds makes it easy to follow her through the space. Tam's tortured face on the last page has stuck with me all week.. she's having a really rough time! Lefrara- Obviously you didn't finish, but I can feel the story starting to get going and hook me right when it ends.. I hope you can get the bb finished up!

Drifter Ronin: Nice work on what was posted you two. Cy: The pacing and paneling was a bit confusing at times, but the fairly consistent quality made me feel like you had a schedule and followed it, which was great to see. Lef: Its off to a good start, looking forward to seeing the finished product. Uh, I think you meant Sun? I wasn’t even in this battle XD

What sort of madness has Void City unleashed on our poor overworked feline? A demonic canine. What a good matchup. Sunrise - Well done. That twist was fantastic given your opponent. Nailed it. Keep searching for that way out, Tam! Lefrafra - Liking what you have finished. Don't be afraid to ask for an extension, if required. Good luck with the bb!

Nice work on what was posted you two. Cy: The pacing and paneling was a bit confusing at times, but the fairly consistent quality made me feel like you had a schedule and followed it, which was great to see. Lef: Its off to a good start, looking forward to seeing the finished product.

[quote] I was a little confused about the significance of the chip Kujo held up though? Cy: I was going places with it, but it's a surveillance chip from Tam's intro story. It'll make more sense when I post the rest of the pages.

Look at my boy, doing his evil works. Sunrise, you really captured his general terribleness.

Sun - Colouring half of this in less than a day you absolute madmannn. Kudos. This was a really sinister comic and I dug how you really pushed Kujo’s villainy, the last page was great! I was confused by the story though. I get what happened in the end, but why was the guy with water being shot up in the first place, even if he’d stolen the water? Lefrafra - Ah sorry you got sick man! I liked where this was going, really enjoyed how you stylised Tam and did the night sky. I was a little confused about the significance of the chip Kujo held up though?

Yes!

SPACE CAT! DEMON DOG! SPACE CAT! DEMON DOG! SPACE CAT! DEMON DOG! SPACE CAT! DEMON DOG! SPACE CAT! DEMON DOG!

CAT VS. DOG BATTLE FORETOLD BY PROPHECY