Brobin: great to see this duo back and you doing some more comic stuff, Would love to see more of them and some more future comics this was really cute. Also page 3 had a really cool layout.
energy: you just gotta keep on keeping on, it's good you were able to post something but you gotta work on being able to do a little bit everyday regardless of how you feel. it's not about what you do it's more about doing it more and more.
Dragon: I like your drawings and thank you so much for all the establishing shots. I like how you don't put too much dialog or written sound effects. You let quiet moments be quiet and let your images speak for themselves. You also know how to conserve your energy well and when to work a drawing and when to let it be finished enough. I like the way you have your panels sitting on top of the establishing shots - this style of organization looks esp. good when colored. but in black and white, I think you'll need to find a way to keep your panels and line art looking more distinguished and and separate from each other.
Energy: I commend you for being brave enough to submit what ever you had. that was honorable of you. If this were a school report, you would have made at least a 20% for at least attaching a file with some work in it. It looks like it was going to be kind of a peaceful story.
Brobin_dragon - This was a cute exchange between these characters. Keep up the good work.
Energy - The panels and the sketches look really good. Sorry to see you couldn't finish. Don't be afraid to ask for an extension when something comes up. Hope everything is well!
TheCydork:
Brobin - Ahh its great to see these two back! This was such a cute comic, everybody and everything looks cute. Your style has this really wholesome, pleasant vibe to it, and the interactions were just cute. I loved the whole naming thing on page 7, and Kazue’s reaction XD
Energy - There’s really too little to comment on here, sorry.
Thank you! :D That's just what I was going for!
Brobin - Ahh its great to see these two back! This was such a cute comic, everybody and everything looks cute. Your style has this really wholesome, pleasant vibe to it, and the interactions were just cute. I loved the whole naming thing on page 7, and Kazue’s reaction XD
Energy - There’s really too little to comment on here, sorry.
Well, it's definitely been fun to jump back into comic-making. I definitely should've done a beyond battle before joining the rumble to warm up... But no regrets! I think I'll post a self-critique AFTER the voting period is over (to not influence any votes, haha ^u^;;; ), so please- if anyone comments, just let me know what you liked! No criticism for this time round, sorry!
kubo:
Good luck, you two! Can't wait to see what you throw at each other!
Thanks Kubo! :D I'm excited to have two weeks for a comic this time, haha- hopefully this time around I won't heck up the photo-taking process ^6^;;;
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