Love the cartoon villain vibe that he's giving me and the comically large head adds to that feel. It's nice to see a prelude to the rumble roulette battle! I think your inking has improved in this comic too that's a huge plus! Good luck in Rumble Roulette!

This was a fun setup. As someone else who has a goat character I understand the struggle of drawing a goat head. When drawing a goat head (or any anthro head for that matter) you gotta be awar that they aren't the same size as human heads, so it will effect your proportions as a whole. In these panels his head is big and looks more like him wearing a mascot head on his head than his actual head. Also a specific goat tip is that even in most 3/4th views you only see the one eye facing us, though it seems like your intentionally not doing that which is fine because it's not a goat you're drawing but a goat person. But even then you could make the head a little smaller overall to fit better on the body. Good luck with future comics with him and keep him alive for my goat boy who didn't make it.

Nice set up Obergoat. Would love to see the other two pages with some color. Fair thee well in the Rumble Roulette!

A fun little prologue for whats to come - well done! Just one little tip, give as much love to the inks of your background as you have done the character, the character's inks look great but the backgrounds are a little lackluster - I know they're a pain but it'll be worth it for the overall outcome! Best of look for the rumble.

ok the buildup is amazing. god i love the last page where he´s going hysteric. good job. the colors on page 1 were a good thing. hope to see a fully colored comic next time :) my only nitpik is that his design could use a little more practice in terms of proportions. its a cool design but the over sized head is a little too big.

Landers is just so legitimately fun to watch hahah, he's got this energy that I'm just really enjoying, like a classic villain feel with the laugh and everything! I like his dynamic with his AI Margaret too, what an excellent name for your AI assistant looool. That's the event that's referenced in his bio then? That's such a long time to be stuck in a teleporter ouchhh, I'm definitely interested to see this continued in the rumble! I really want to see his reaction when he finally steps out of that teleporter lol- as well as what caused him to be released from that. Enjoyed this a lot, I smile at his energy!

This is such a fun idea! A little prelude to the Rumble, love it. Interested to see how you continue from this. Are you implying Dimitri was stuck in that teleporter for 30 years though? God damn, that’s rough.

Just a quick story for me and my future opponent to use as a jumping off point for Rumble Roulette (if they want to of course, they can ignore it if they want) and also to help me get into a good drawing groove again before the rumble starts.