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Speed Death Tournament 2020, Round 1
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Sabulive
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Uploaded January 29, 2020
Comments (11)
sabu
I'm so happy to see more comics from you! Your work is always top-notch, which makes it hard to give any advice on haha. I think the only things I might nitpick are that there seemed to be a lot of shots where the character filled up most of the panel and maybe felt a little claustrophobic??? And some of your line widths could have maybe used more variation, although I feel like it's highly likely that that's just because you did this all in a pretty short amount of time. Either way, if that helps, great, if not, then just never mind me haha. I absolutely love your expressions, especially considering your opponents' characters really only had eyes to work with. I think your use of body language and how you wrote dialogue helped a lot with that. I love these characters and hope we get to see more soon!corn
I love General Knox! His arrogance is great, and I want to see more of it. I think the painterly/lineless style is really working for you, although it felt like it could use a bit sharper detail in some places, especially on characters' faces. Regardless, I loved your use of color, and it also made the stark white sound effects stand out that much more! I'm not sure how I feel about using your handwriting instead of a font, but I do think your idea of using more of a hint of a speech bubble with a transparent background is pretty cool. I like being able to see more of the pretty colors in the background :D I can't wait for more!