thanks for comments, Molotov, you broke my heart =p i'll work on backgrounds, thanks for the input.

heh heh heh

Does Kyra play guitar with her feet?! That would be amazingly sick. I bring that up because I actually saw a man playing guitar in that fashion in Balboa Park once... it was pretty amazing, let me tell you...

I was looking forward to a Latem comic, too. DAMNATION. stilled_life: Definitely on the more backgrounds. I actually like your page format--made perfect sense to me and made this comic more interesting, I think, than it would've been with total typical panelling. Go darker in some places when you color to add more interest. Otherwise--nice Dumas clock (haha!) and I agree with Jingu--hee hee--secret women's activitays.

Molotov, no. What happened to ur promise of making amends to those u defaulted on?! C'mon dude!

Nice first battle. I'm not a big fan of the undefined page format but I was able to follow the story so that's ok. I do agree that you would have received higher marks if there were more backgrounds but you still did very well. Good job. JV

... the clocks are so cute. Good way to put women secret activities too.

Nice comic, stilled-life. I thought Kyra didn't have arms, so how is she holding stuff? Anyways, my only crit is the lack of backgrounds. It's a nice comic without backgrounds, but I bet it could be an AWESOME comic if you added backgrounds and got rid of all that \"negative space,\" to steal a line from someone else's crit. Good work.

wahoo, posted! *screams*

wow, everyone wants a piece of me? There will be no defualtness going on here, only hand cramps. Molotov, you better be working hard too!

Stilled life, if you don't toss out any defaults, i'd like a wack at you next.

*ambiguous statement* GOOD LUCK! HOPE YOU WIN!

wow.