oh yeah and untill you learn how to use photoshop properly don't color at all your coloring really sucks...just do it in pencil or use color pencil....stop disrespecting turner by turning in this bullshit...we represent him cause believe it or not he taught us everything we know so no colors from you ok pal.
the truth shall set you free cregory. 2.4 suck all amounts of ass. you need a new character the alliance is dead...nobody cares anymore. your in college now don't you have somethin else better to do than this b.s. come on i'm just tryin to help you grow because your work isn't getting any better. it looks like the same old shit you been doin....and i no your better than me and this shit is not better than what i can do. so either bring the hottness which you have never done on this site or move on and do somethin else like go to a party and get some ass or somethin cause 2.4 sucks everyone can draw him and he's worthless he has no coolness about him...NOTHING!!!!....comeon we all want to see alot more better fights...
2.4, I really like your lineart but the colors don't really work with it yeah.. I feel like I'm in a disco reading it or something XD. Nice work though.
Awesomeness Cross dude :D.
wow ... I gotta hand it to ya this is to me battle of exploration.
C2, I can tell that u half-assed the whole thing as usual, but I see u're taking on kindofa knew style with this one. Even thought I aint even gonna fake, i was kinda confused at first, it turned out real funny with u're special guest \"wupsee\" appearances. oh and by the way I think u may have made a mistake and knida forgot to put a couple Alliance members on the last page, like umm...
ME!!!!!! but it's still hot for another half-assed job
Gryph: I never seen anybody do 3D backgrounds with 2D characters in a comic before and I do think u did a pretty good job. BUT, the whole one sweep KO on 2.4 was corny, even for a rival gang war. other than that though I liked all the 3D in your comic, windows and chimneys or no windows and chimneys it was hot.
Wicked fight from both sides, but I'm gonna go with Gryphon on this one.
C2J: Your art was killer, but it was really confusing to follow. Same as what people have said earlier about Cross' mech; I just thought he had a big gun until the pan-out in pg. 4. I think this is a little beneath your usual standard.
Gryphon: The 3D is killer, man. I don't care what other people say, I think it's awesome the way you combined 2D line-art and the 3D backgrounds. They're right about having to finish up the Void map, though, windows and chimneys would add a whole other level of detail. It still kicks all kinds of ass, so my vote goes to you.
c2j. You really put no effort into this fight. Prolly took you two hours to do all that. Seeing this makes me believe imma defintly win our deathmatch as soon as you decide to accept it. The quality isnt that good and its confusing to keep up and tel what is going on.
Gryphon. You on the other hand spent alot more time on this and more effort considering you been working on these 3d backdrops for a while and the quality of the characters in the comics were really good. Loox like you still could have doen another page or two to end it but you did meet the minimum page requirement.
Too bad you guys had to rush, this had the potential to be a good fight.
2.4: This entry was really confusing, you never do get a good look at Cross's mech and I didn't figure out WHAT he was in until page 4, when there's a complete but blurry shot of it in the distance... also, some pages didn't flow too well from panel to panel. Good effort though, the energy is great as usual.
Cross: Ooh, shots from your 3-D project. Interesting idea, but I feel like having rendered objects in the foreground making physical contact with your drawn art, as in the second page... it doesn't mix too well, putting the lineless right side-by-side with the lineart. It looks good as a background, though.
Pretty good guys, sorry to hear that college got the best of ya, but that don't mean you can't make a comic look good.
C2j: Not your best as you'll probably agree with me, but artwise, you could of shown some extra panels or something to show the mecha coming into play (took me a while to realise Cross was in a mecha) but other than that, some dialoge between the two would of been nice. My vote is for you though.
Cross: I do love the cityscape that you did... but it's just too plain looking right now, seriously man, you've got to add some windows and crap like that soon (I do realize you're still working on that however). Um... to be honest, I wasn't as entertained with your comic when I compair it to 2.4's... mainly because it just seems anti climactic when 2.4 is taken down in one attack... but the art more than made up for it.
Both of you did great, but in this war between respark and Alliance, I'm giving my vote to the alliance in this one. Keep it up or something?
im uploaded now. Gryphon i totally agree wit u the college is a bitch right now. So my fight isnt as good as i wanted it to be. this is as finished as it is gonna get so if any one has a crit \"dont blame it on me blame it on school\"
ok, college is a bitch. So i uploaded my pages, but the story is a little \"brief\" due to lack of time and tons of school work. o well, next fight will be more up to par.
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