Swan looks so badass on page 6! My only critique is that panel 3.3 needs something in the foreground to give the room some depth, the scene looks flat.

Flutterbyes: This is a really intriguing plot twist, powerfully told. Although, I'm not sure if I follow the link between the first and second scene (is she crying because of the scene that's shown immediately after?). I'm on the edge of my seat for whatever's next in Swan's storyline. She's reeling from the events in Kozi's side of HW.

This is a really intriguing plot twist, powerfully told. Although, I'm not sure if I follow the link between the first and second scene (is she crying because of the scene that's shown immediately after?). I'm on the edge of my seat for whatever's next in Swan's storyline.

Honestly I cant even think of any critiques, this is just so good! I love the way you do expressions, you do a fantastic job at conveying such a wide variety of emotions. I'm so hyped for Swan to be back in action!!

Oh man this is super intriguing! I really like how this ties the events of heavyweight into setting up something new, and I’m definitely excited to see more about this new threat from inside the NVCPD. The dialogue is great as well (thank you for the cameo!!) I’m just overall really invested in Swan’s storyline hahah good stuff!

This was a great follow up. I love how you connected the thread of only one cop showing up to a future unknown threat of someone pulling the strings and potentially a new enemy. While I overall like the use of screen-tones I don't like the way it looks on skin when used as shading for the skin, maybe it's because screen tones are used on so many non organic things like the walls and clothing that when you put similar tones on the skin something seems off to me but i'm honestly not exactly sure why I don't like the look of it there when it works everywhere else. Also I love your cyanscale comics and always want to see more of it.

liked this call to action. Swan is obviously still struggling internally, but she’s ready to take covert action, and I personally can’t wait to see! I really liked the way the mix of screen tones and textures worked out- they fit really well with your style! I also really enjoyed the first couple of pages the most- there was just so much intense emotion that I feel was portrayed so well- from Swan’s feelings to the panel composition. Lots of feels!! Gimme moooooorreeee

This was a wonderful follow-up! Your art is so solid, it looks professional imo and the writing/dialogue feels natural. honestly, I can't think of crit! I'm looking forward to seeing what Swan gets up to next.

Submitted! This takes place RIGHT after the events of Heavyweight 2019, just to keep in mind ~ Also got to mess around with some screentones.