These were both really good!! Honestly I'm not even sure what to critique on either of these so I'll just say what I liked lol Mr. Kent: Man I really hope these four actually get to be roommates, the way you depicted their interaction is so much fun! I wish it was longer cuz the end felt a bit abrupt and I could just read about them for days. The punch line was hilarious though XD Flytee: I LOVE your colors! And I loved all the little jokes throughout the comic, and the overall tone was just... so good. Rae and Blue are so good I hope their stay in Void keeps going well for them!!

yay thank you for the crits and comments! I really appreciate it <3 [quote]My only crit is I feel like Gargonne feels slightly out of character, mainly she just comes off more aggressive than i have seen her in other comics. Ah damn, I was going for fed up and overzealous, because she really wants to get the contract done. I'll be more careful with dialogue in the future. (@misterkent sorry If I repped your girl wrong.) Flutterbyes: There are some digital flats (corrections?) that stand out against the grain of the analog medium. Applying a texture of your paper of choice over them might help integrate them. Yeah, I went over some marks and touched up the odd bit of colour. Looking back I totally could've been more subtle with these corrections. I also regret just going over all the boarders in such a harsh white. I'm still getting the hang of transerring a traditional comics to digital, this was absolutely a learning experience.

Kent: this was cute with a fun little interaction and In general i like the way you draw women, I do wish there was more to the comic though. Flytee: Great comic, the word bubbles here are more consistent than in your intro. I also really like your painterly colors and the feel the comic has. My favorite part is page 9 i love the layout you do for it. My only crit is I feel like Gargonne feels slightly out of character, mainly she just comes off more aggressive than i have seen her in other comics. other than that great comic and i look forward to seeing how their relationship develops

Mister Kent: Oh, yeah they're kind of kindred spirits aren't they? Sort of. Everyone is ADORABLE, Blue in particular. It's a shame that we didn't get a follow up to that private conversation, but it's a really cute interaction. Flytee: A sweet little adventure. Gotta love when we get some analog love. There's a really warm and appealing aspect to your rendering. I think maybe you could have processed the scans just a little differently to better manage texture, but I'm no expert on that. There are some digital flats (corrections?) that stand out against the grain of the analog medium. Applying a texture of your paper of choice over them might help integrate them.

Oh no where'd it go :(

Thank YOU Flytee, Rae and Blue are a joy to draw :D I'm honored to help welcome them to Void!

Submitted- I'm not happy with a handful of panels, but hopefully the comic is fun overall. Thanks, Mister kent for battling me!