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Intro Story
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Uploaded June 13, 2019
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Brobin_Dragon
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6 years ago
Love the design! :D She looks cool!
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Heathen
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6 years ago
Great intro! Very solid execution all around.
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Linclair
Inker
6 years ago
I'm so happy to see Charlie! Congrats on getting her in Not much to say but that final page was absolutely stunning!! Great job and I can't wait to see her first battle
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SirJellyRaptor
Inker
6 years ago
WOOF COP! WOOF COP!
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Batty
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6 years ago
I LOVE HER!!! The lighting in this is so good omg. And I friggin love that bait-and-switch with the ending. Totally setting it up so it seems like she's gonna eat him but then nope, just "Sir ur under arrest" while she takes his gun. Comedy GOLD, had me wheeze-laughing. I cannot WAIT to see more of her omg
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TheCydork
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6 years ago
Loved this! Can’t think of any critique :) I especially loved the last page, Charlie’s werewolf form is A+ and I love how it looks like she’s going to eat him, but just arrests him instead, it’s pretty funny haha
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Petrichor
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6 years ago
Easily one of my top fave characters now <3 Your art style is 10/10 and your choice of colors are perfect for this dark setting. I see you have a great notion of perspective and anatomy as well! Oh and i love that she can control her transformation and uses her abilities on her job, can't wait to see more of your work!!
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Reecer6
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6 years ago
Ooh, this is a subtle yet strong introduction! I love the transformation shots of course, and the rough linework and subtle movement lines of the action panels are great! The anticlimax got me - I'm too used to werewolves that just have no dang control over themselves, it's great Charlie has some friggin' discipline <.< I was going to complain about the house being a bit bare, but, you know, it was robbed. Fair enough.
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Flutterbyes
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6 years ago
Oooh, you're rocking the eerie yellow light here. I like how it warms up just before the final panel, too.
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Brobin_Dragon
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6 years ago
Love the design! :D She looks cool!
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Pita (Slowly getting back into it)
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6 years ago
I'm gay for this cop. Woof.
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Hellis
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6 years ago
I love her so much. My one complain is that the backgrounds are a bit basic, and could have used a little extra work. But your colors are so strong and complementary that I didnt think about it the first readthrough. Good job on getting her in!
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EnKa
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6 years ago
I love her!!! Congrats on getting her in and booooy is that an intro. Execution is great especially on the color palette you used. A neat little intro that gives enough info about Charlie to work with her. Well done!
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Snowy
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6 years ago
I love her! She seems really fun!
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Energy
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6 years ago
She's in! Congrats! I really like how you convey the night scene here and the lighting effects. I hope to see more of her in the future.
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Mixiemon
Writer
6 years ago
Congrats on getting her in. I love your colors in this and how you use the yellow as spoting out the areas of light it looks super good.
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Dechado
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6 years ago
I LOVE HER! @w@
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