Avoid stacking panels on the left, as in page 1. It confuses the natural reading order and forces the reader to make a choice between moving down or to the right, when the natural flow is left to right, then down.

surprisingly sweet and restrained. I quite appreciate the little bit of character we're given here.

I'm glad the lil terror is back. Of all your characters she's my personnal fav

That shot with all the baddies together is really good, you often tend to zoom in a bunch so it's nice to see you do a big group shot. The writing however didn't really work for me. I'm unable to exactly say why but one thing is just don't like the line "what could go wrong?" cause it's overused and not a good way of getting the reader to be interested in what's to come since it's almost like a signal of things will go wrong. While this story didn't work for me you are definitly improving and keep on making more stuff.

I had a really good laugh at the way she envision some of voids baddies. This was comptently written for a 4 page, talk heavy comic and a nice ending of the year I'd say. The pacing was actually really nice, so kudos on that. Your style is is finding its own legs to stand on as well, If you grind the fundamentals you'll find that your style is gonna evolve along with it.

Just a heads up! There will be characters Cassidy will depict in her own point of view when they get brought up. Wish me luck UwU