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Intro Story
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Uploaded July 03, 2018
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Linclair
Inker
7 years ago
Azu seems like a cool person and I'm also so hyped for more musical characters! I think you did a good job filling the environment, nothing felt empty or underused artwise! Can't wait to see her in a battle so we can start learning more about her
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Pepper JAQ
All-Rounder
7 years ago
Solid art. I think my only issue is that the sudden focus on the bucket with the cash in it. Given Azu's sweating, I'm guessing the money wasn't there before and was magiced in (i only guess because of the implication of the two not having money means that the current amount might not have been there a moment before)? Or maybe that that is all she made so far? It's not totally clear. We never see the bucket before that. Maybe a third page could have helped with that a bit more, or like a though 'well, at least I got enough for lunch' or something. But yeah, aside from that (wordy) nit pick, good stuff. It's a nice moment.
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ghostly
All-Rounder
7 years ago
Wah! She seems really cool, and I'm excited to see more of her in action around Void! Your art is nice and consistent too. A very pleasant read!
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Catalessi
All-Rounder
7 years ago
ohh i like your style! waiting to read you again
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Amaloo
All-Rounder
7 years ago
This art style felt so familiar to me & now I remember why! I recognize you from back in the day, hello! Anyways, this is great looking forward to seeing more.
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yarnwitch
All-Rounder
7 years ago
SUMIKO WANTS YOU TO JOIN HER BAND.
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