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Intro Story
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Uploaded March 21, 2018
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Kozispoon
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7 years ago
This was a great appetizer by way of inks, gore and character introduction. But now we're ready for more of a main course feast. I'm glad the comments and feedback you've gotten is to punch things up and do more because I feel this comic felt restrained by way of just how creepy and unsettling this character can be. Bring it, bro.
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William_Duel
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7 years ago
Julz: VIRGIN KILLER SWEATER!!!!! It seems like a Virgin was indeed successfully killed so it works.
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Julz
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7 years ago
VIRGIN KILLER SWEATER!!!!!
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Dygenerate
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7 years ago
I think a comment I made got eaten so this is shorter. ): Like I don't know if she goes after bad guys exclusively or if the "good taste" isn't just rhetorical. I like how clearly everything was presented and she has a great personality I think.
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Wubble
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7 years ago
Φη can step on me whenever she wants yes please. Also solid work all around - all I got is small nit picks, like her feet placement in the last panel makes for an awkward stepping and crossing her legs. I get what you were going for but you missed here.
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Heathen
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7 years ago
Just gonna echo the crotch shadow comment, and add that the bloody bits needed more detail to sell that viscera. Definitely see a marked improvement in your line work and figures here though. Page one clearly had the most time put into it, but overall a really good looking intro. Can't wait to see who this black widow gets her fangs in first.
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Rainbow Ichi
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7 years ago
All I can say is woah o_o this character's unique. She's super picky it seems. Wonder what's her fave.
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Rose
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7 years ago
I want Φη to stomp my face
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yarnwitch
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7 years ago
Please please PLEASE be friends with Sumiko!
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Jiisuri
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7 years ago
THAT sweater huh. :V Also, I love this character already. Good to see you back and well. Your stuff is looking even better now with all the stuff you've been doing since the last time.
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GPS-Device
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7 years ago
PyrasTerran: yaya I really wanna battle this character but watch out with where/how you etch your shadows; The one you use in the crotch area is accidentally making her look extra bushy I mean unless that was the intent then alright NOT MY INTENTION, haha Didnt realize that was the effect given off at the time, but after being told, yeah, WHOOPS. I guess i was a little more out of practice than i thought
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PyrasTerran
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7 years ago
yaya I really wanna battle this character but watch out with where/how you etch your shadows; The one you use in the crotch area is accidentally making her look extra bushy I mean unless that was the intent then alright
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Radji
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7 years ago
Instant fav character of the year for me. Wanna fight her with Marie.
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