Actually he was free to it that way.

So none of us can complain, but whatever I screwed this match up anyways.

Very nice job Neon, you both did good. But for Mikal to put Neon scared like that wasn\'t really paying much attention to Neons character and personality.

fairly even across the board I\'d say , Mikal had the lenght to carry a better bit of story , neo  , nice panel layouts and some nice artwork to boot , shame about the lack of depth to the conflict though , Mikal got the upperhand for me on this one.

I\'d like to see more finished work out of both you guys. Things are looking good on both sides of the table, but just \"good.\" I can tell both you guys have some talent, but my votes go to Mikal for this one, as I found his story more entertaining.

I gotta go with Phlip on this.  He pretty much said it word for word.

Dude I forgot you had me on your watch list, but my comments very dumb anyways but cool advice. Love the artwork dude.

To clarify, my intent was to show shock, not make him \'look like a punk\'.  According to Neo\'s bio he\'s a teenager with special powers, not a seasoned combat vet, so in my mind accidentally immolating (or at least thinking you did) would trigger shock and disbelief more than anything else.
So to Neo (and Lamia) I wasn\'t trying to punk out Neo or belittle\'im. I just wrote the characters according to what\'s known (Though I -did- catch that \'Puffy the Magic Gangsta Dragon\', I\'m not vindictive   ) .  My first fight a few of the senior VOIDians pointed out a solid fact to me; No one knows your character like you so you can\'t assume they\'ll play the reactions of them like you would.  You gotta let your writing (both in bio and future/past works) build something for everyone else to work off of.
For the record, I dig your art. Specifically your dynamics and panel compositions.
Good Fight!

My comic didn\'t turn out the way I wanted it anyways, but I plan on making a Beyound Battle story so everyone can see what kinda Kid Neosuke is. And I know how my time was while trying to get the comic done. So its the public to go with how I did.

Mikal I like your work I just feel that you made him like a punk. But its your story so I\'d still give ya a 10 out of 10 dude.

Good battle you two.

Mikal: My vote goes to you solely in entertainment and creativity, quality wise I wish I could of seen more background instead of character. But the comic turned out to be a good read for a change, and that got my vote. Feel kinda sorry for Neo all of a sudden.

Neosuke: Good art from you, but your story seemed like something straight outta DBZ, the whole \"I\'m not gonna give you my all this time, but next time... hoo boy will we tussle!\" plot has been dragged out one too many times already by many a storyteller. Start by giving Neo some personality and you\'ll have a better story in no time. Good art though.

Let\'s see some more fights in the future, keep it up or something?

I wanted to make a cover but how it all turnd out @ the end, would have made the cover look bad.

And uploaded.  For any interested, the cover (pg 1) was done last, hence the sketchiness.

Thanks, and right back at ya dude.

Thanks for the vote of confidence qtr, definetly gonna give it the fire.  
Good luck to ya Neo, lets give a good show

Mikal with every battle your improving, keep it up kid with a good amount of effort, and you\'ll win one...  Good luck to you too Neo, time to get started!