kure, you did very well i like it alot the whole thing polishes off very nicely

Both pieces were offbeat & zany...gave my major votes to kure ji ori  due to the inking handles...the spartan\'s story seemed to break down visually for me toward the end but it was funny...good stuff guys.

Untitled - more was necissary for me to give you the win...your lines were very disjointed in a lot of areas and I didn\'t quite understand what was hapening in the last two pannels.

Kure - you get my vote...the style you\'re working with will develop a lot more with practise, and I am looking forward to seeing more work. good story, good laughs.

Anonymous love the first page man well done!

Damn, that was awesome. You two rock. I loved the story, Kure. =D

There\'s a lot of nifty linework in these pieces, I really dig the sharpness of both your entries guys.  I will say I enjoyed the Florida Bill piece a little more with all the cool action, but Untitled, you put up a strong effort with your style.  Keep it going guys!

Kure, great fight. I dig your style big time, and the story was pretty tight. Keep it up.

Untitled, you have a lot of potential with the B&W thing. I advise you check out the \"Sin City\" series by Frank Miller if you\'ve never heard of it. Take some more dynamic angles, and really play with the light and shadow thing. So far, the comic comes out looking kinda bland. Keep working at it!

I had fun drawing this as well, although i ran out of inking time SO quickly so its rushed but i guess that\'s the point.  the best of luck to you.

Soooo i guess ill make a comment then! Had fun drawin this fight, cant wait to see what your pages look like man! ^_^