you both need to put more of an effort into your fights

The sizing problem on Cherrie\'s second page wasn\'t a problem for me.  I could still read it fine when was zoomed out.  If I couldn\'t read it either way, then it would have been a problem.

Art-wise, both submissions are pretty similar.  Both are still sketchy but Angelina\'s is a bit cleaner.  And uh, pink ink... no.

Writing-wise, Angelina\'s story hade a little more meat to it.  I might suggest that Cherrie consider a title page optional rather than to use it to meet the minimum requirements of the challenge.  More comic, less title.  In other words, do one if you have time.

I\'ve found it to be a rare thing when both submissions in a battle can make me laugh out loud while reading them, which both of you have done here.  Slexy line art, and excellent entertainment value.  Keep up the good work.

Angelidollinda, their heights are wrong on the second page. Cherrie fox 7\'4\" while angelina is 4\' 8\" but you have them sitting together at nearly the same height.

Both art styles are very similar and that style looks quite polished in both cases. AWD edges out Angelido by a little though.

Of the stories both were short and simple but I\'m giving AWD the edge here as that story had some action in it and gave a better sense of Angelina\'s character. Angelido\'s story was perhaps too short. Seemed like more of a punchline with no joke to build it up.

omg I love both of your styles!!! <3<3  >_< I have to battle both of you sometime in the future xD!!

I have no problems, other than, Cherrie dear? The second page was kinda big.

Great job the both of you ^^

short and sweet is right. AWD definitely had a better quality fight, with three actual pages instead of two and a cover. <_< Still, I thought angel\'s fight was funnier, I\'m not sure why. Probably was the Swanky Roe cameo.

BTW: AWD, you did Rockman Neo on Newgrounds?! OMG, that was freakin\' great! Just wanted to say so, since I don\'t have an account on NG.

Cute!

Both were short & sweet, and it works well.

Woot! Swanky cameo!

Cute stuff.

Very cute, both of you. ^^

Wha? AWD came back! I smell a challenge...
Three pages.. not much space for story i suppose.. and that\'s what i\'m seeing.. very little story and almost no actual battling.
However, it\'s kinda refreshing not to see \"traditional\" battles all the time. And i guess for two chars who don\'t really know each other the limited story actually works quite well in both cases. This brings it down to art... and i may just have to give AWD the upper hand there.. only by a little... but still.
I love both you guys though.. so good luck to both of you as the votes keep coming in...

FINISHED! *dies* x_x

Ignore my entry... i\'m going to redo it during my extention

oops, crap ^^;;

Cherrie Fox has an extension

Cherrie Fox has an extension

seforin: I\'ve been searching for those mp3s
PLEASE contact me at 3leaves at mail.nu if you see this.
thanks

wow for what im about to say im probably gonna lose any chance of joining my character and such. But AWD Ive been a personal fan of your artwork since i was first shown glimces of the rockman neo project you did a while back. Your art style in mechs is something i hope to achieve mechnical wise.

I still have all your mp3s of your rockman neo sound track you did. Even if i get in shit for writing this i just want you to know your artwork (one of many) is a personal reason why i got from 3d modeling to drawing recently....for both self improvement reasons, and reasons i wanna increase my 3d by learning it by hand first.....hope you win this match dude!

OMG! Awd I didn\'t know you were back on Entervoid!! Good luck you two!!

Ah. AWD,  I know who you are!  I\'ll be studying you. *smirks*  Good luck to you both!

Andrew Dickman. HEH. >=) I\'d like a peice of that to mop my floor with. HUR HUR. Let\'s see what you can do.

OHSHIT. First CB, now Andy D ! Damn man, I was hesitating to ask why you left VOID in the first place, but welcome back man !

THIS WILL BE HOT. >_O

Ah, now I remember (and took a look at his website) Andrew Dickman! I remember seeing your stuff on deviantart, very well animated art you\'ve got yourself, I know I won\'t be dissapointed now... or will I? TIME WILL TELL!!

AWD... I don\'t know about you, but that sounds really familiar right now... You two better not dissapoint!

Alright, battlin' mah buddy! ^^