aerismccain your style is so expressive and free flowing. I love it! MikalXaiver  your character is very creative and spirited. I can\'t wait to see where you character goes in the future.

Well, the only reason everything isnt colored is cause I didnt have the time to. I was trying to get it all done but it just didnt work out that way, which was a bummer for me as well. That and I did end up doing that rush job at the end too and it didnt come out like I had hoped it would, I was going to try and get an explanation of the shadows in there but time was against me then. Bah, need to stop using that excuse I suppose! XD

Next time I\'ll plan a bit better

Intresting fight you two!

Mikal: Looking alot better than the fight with TBW, but you still need to kick it up another notch. For one thing, your anatomy needs some more work, in some panels Cirrus looked like she had no torso whatsoever, sometimes she looked thicker than how she normaly is. Things like that you\'ve got to keep an eye out for. Oh, and stop using that same rooftop you used in the last fight, there are other places for Mikal to fight ya know. Also, don\'t touch that blur tool man. Other than that, pretty decent comic man.

Aeris: Finally we see your fight! And it\'s not too shabby if I say so myself. You had something going with that color scheme you had there, though I don\'t know why you didn\'t color everything, really liking how it\'s looking right now, but the story could use a touch-up here and there. For one thing, the ending was pretty anti-climactic with Mikal just being ensnared in tar or whatever the hell that thing is (you should explain what that is or something next time), other than that, very good first comic, I hope to see more soon!

Aeris gets my vote! Keep it up or something?

Great looking battle you two.

good fight from the two of you guys.

Mikal: Something seemed up with your art, amn. It lacked the tightness that you exhibited in your previous fights, and almost felt cartoony in some places. There were some pose/anatomy issues, especially in page 2. I thought the battle was pretty tight, but things did get a tad confusing at the end. B rating.

Aeris: Sweet line art, made all the better when you added color and effects. The coloring and light effects I give you big props on, because that is seriously sweet. The ending seemed just a tad out of place, like Mikal should have broken free, but didn\'t. Nonetheless, great work from you.

well well well.. TOOK LONG ENOUGH lol
I think the both of you did very good jobs.. and i can see some collaboration went on.. shows preparation. nice, nice.
Mikal\'s half of the battle, though good.. seemed to lack story build up. As a reader it feels like i was dropped in the middle of something already going on. Other than a few slightly rushed frames, though, it was good.
I think my vote will have to go to Aeris this time though. She claims she was rushed but i think that\'s only visible in the lack of color in most of the pages. Though the stories were similar, her\'s had more build up and feeling to it. I\'m pleased.
I have to add.. man, is Cirrus hot. lol

I think we both kinda rushed the last pages. I just wish I had more time to finish some of the effects I wanted to do, but I ran out of time, got too ambitious I suppose

Alrighty, I\'m uploaded (i think).  Very rushed job but not bad for a weeks worth of work.  would have like to got colors on everything and the last page is garbage but c\'est la vive. Good luck to ya Aeris!

Ok pages uploaded, hope they dont suck too much. Had to really rush a few things x.x

due to ongoing computer issues...mikal has been given an extension

Crunch time! @.@

just 4 days left.. woohoo!! can\'t wait to see this one.. been waiting for it quite a while.

And I course I wish luck to Mikal as well. But this is basically a pick-up from one I had to previously cancel! Should be good to go now! XD

of course I wish the best of luck to aeris, this one\'s been about a month+ in the making ^~

wow, a fight without words being past. no good lucks or positive remarks? well good luck to you all.