Kure vs. Res
Critiques & Comments
# 24
Posted:
Mar 29 2005, 08:16 PM
great showing from both of you...wonderful energy from both
# 23
Posted:
Mar 29 2005, 12:40 AM
Nice battle, kids! Both stories were very amusing.
Kure, I\'d just like to note that you have unneccesary comments at some points. Example: \"I had to ask...\" on the second page. The expression should be able to say it all.
Res, I like your layout what with the panels being more \"stacked.\" The second page was a bit hard to understand what exactly was going on; it\'s sort of a jumble of action. I was able to figure it out after another, slower look, though.
Kure, I\'d just like to note that you have unneccesary comments at some points. Example: \"I had to ask...\" on the second page. The expression should be able to say it all.
Res, I like your layout what with the panels being more \"stacked.\" The second page was a bit hard to understand what exactly was going on; it\'s sort of a jumble of action. I was able to figure it out after another, slower look, though.
# 22
Posted:
Mar 28 2005, 05:34 PM
somes ones been reading my diary
# 21
Posted:
Mar 28 2005, 05:30 PM
I hope Res wins... and I hope Kure dies in a death match... and then in real life
# 20
Posted:
Mar 28 2005, 12:17 PM
Both entrie\'s art looked on the sketchy side, but I think it worked more in Kure\'s case as his style is more cartoonish. Also Kure\'s layout and storytelling were more clear. Res\'s was rather confusing in cluttered.
On the story side, Kure has the clear win. The writing gave the characters more life. Res\'s made them seem like just two guys who want to fight. Kure\'s also had more humor.
On the story side, Kure has the clear win. The writing gave the characters more life. Res\'s made them seem like just two guys who want to fight. Kure\'s also had more humor.
# 19
Posted:
Mar 27 2005, 02:02 AM
WOO! XD Looks awesome, guys! Really great pages. I love the action-packedness.
# 18
Posted:
Mar 26 2005, 06:33 PM
wow this is the first battle ive voted on in forever. my way went for res. kures was awesome too, but res is pure AKTION SAUCE
# 17
Posted:
Mar 26 2005, 03:14 PM
Thats what yo get fo messin\' wit my man!
*does the black girl snap*
*does the black girl snap*
# 16
Posted:
Mar 26 2005, 02:28 PM
Kure, one of these days you just gotta sit and spend about an hour finishing up a pic to perfection XD. You gotta show me some finished pics of yours sometime, cos all I\'ve seen from you are sketches dude.
XD I like your humor.
Res, thats kickkkkkkass. Much respect to ya.
XD I like your humor.
Res, thats kickkkkkkass. Much respect to ya.
# 15
Posted:
Mar 26 2005, 10:36 AM
Kure - Bitchin\' angle on the bottom of the fifth page.
Knomer - Bitchin\' last page.
It\'s early. I\'m not in an objective mood. XD
Knomer - Bitchin\' last page.
It\'s early. I\'m not in an objective mood. XD
# 14
Posted:
Mar 25 2005, 03:09 AM
My head hurts... So all these people need to resubmit their fights?
# 13
Posted:
Mar 24 2005, 06:29 PM
NO BODY VOTE JUST YET!!!
# 12
Posted:
Mar 24 2005, 06:14 PM
wait wait wait, knome DID submit pages, he said!!
Maybe he should resubmit??
Maybe he should resubmit??
# 11
Posted:
Mar 24 2005, 06:12 PM
aww man, not a default? i knomer told me he\'d done the pages...
# 10
Posted:
Mar 6 2005, 04:52 PM
God i hope after all this hype i dont suck.
# 9
Posted:
Mar 6 2005, 11:28 AM
This betta be fuckin\' A, Kure, expecting big things buddy.
Rez, you\'ll have your hands full dude!
Rez, you\'ll have your hands full dude!
# 8
Posted:
Mar 5 2005, 02:06 PM
dish it , and then serv it, kure. we know you can.
# 7
Posted:
Mar 5 2005, 12:38 AM
no no. Given the Heaven, THEN give them Hell (much more painful)
Go kure!
Go kure!
# 6
Posted:
Mar 4 2005, 06:30 PM
Give em hell Kure!!
# 5
Posted:
Mar 3 2005, 07:42 AM
Go kure! Wooo~!
# 4
Posted:
Mar 2 2005, 11:52 AM
stfu fishboy
# 3
Posted:
Mar 1 2005, 07:40 PM
neither did i dood.....
but this should be kick ass!
but this should be kick ass!
# 2
Posted:
Mar 1 2005, 06:09 PM
I didn\'t.
# 1
Posted:
Mar 1 2005, 12:08 PM
I saw it coming from a mile away.
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
3 weeks
Ended:
Mar 30th, 2005
Votes Cast:
27
Page Views:
1427
Winner:
kure ji ori
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Kure: Like I said to Knomer, I wish you had used MORE values in your piece--at least make more definite (harder) lines to pull the characters into the fore. You did that excellently in some places--especially page one. If you\'d\'ve kept that up, you would have gotten the edge from me. I knocked your quality gradient down because of the poor cropping--you sliced page 4, and I could see your SKETCHBOOK RINGS on page 3. NOT COOL. Your marker work was also really streaky--and not in the way I would recognize as deliberate. Good spacing in your length; you paced very well. I enjoyed your story--you definitely got me there with entertainment. I like your scratchy style; reminds me of FLCL but not a rip-off. Keep up your natural style but add some more oomph to it with more black or those markers, man.
HAWT stuff, guys.