Ayumi vs. The Strike

Ayumi vs. The Strike

Ayumi vs. The Strike

by Marley

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by Andre

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Marley
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259 comments
# 26   Posted: Feb 21 2005, 10:35 AM
well i asked for an extension from toast since my internet has been wacking out, and james was here to visit... AND i was at the con, but no biggie i guess

I\'ll post the battle in the forums later.

btw Andre you\'re epic

Andre
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# 25   Posted: Feb 21 2005, 10:15 AM
Aw man thanks everyone. Comments like that make MY day!

Jingu - That was a very fair critique. You spotted a couple of my biggest comic faults. I do need to capture more motion in the drawings themselves. I should really study some more animation styles to get that feeling. Plus, my speedlines and motion lines are often half-assed so that really takes away from it. The fact that i never leave room for captions bugs me too. I see what mean about how it crowds the jokes a lot. Thanks for that great critique!
Kyosho - Thanks for IMing me way back when and encouraging me to come back here!

I hope I have it in me for another one guys - this was so much fun.

jord-Y
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# 24   Posted: Feb 19 2005, 02:01 PM
fucking great stuff!!

Rax
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117 comments
# 23   Posted: Feb 18 2005, 09:38 PM
Wow, Strike, you SO didn\'t dissappoint. I\'m glad you changed it up a little like you did. It keeps the character fresh.

Kyosho
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35 comments
# 22   Posted: Feb 18 2005, 03:12 PM
Best @#$%ing fight I\'ve EVER read. I\'m glad I brought you back. (hee hee) MORE Andre!!

sheldon
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141 comments
# 21   Posted: Feb 18 2005, 04:31 AM
and THAT boys and girls is how a comic is MEANT TO BE DRAWN.
Andre is a beautiful beautiful man...and you put charlie in there...god bless you.

I\'m gonna have to wail on marley something HARDCORE when i see her next. its tackle town for marzipan.

jv7x
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# 20   Posted: Feb 18 2005, 01:43 AM
Oh man Andre!  That was awesome!  I can\'t believe how much your style has evolved.  It\'s fricken\' fantastic!  I hope you had a good experience cuz I so wanna challenge the Strike!  I\'ll have my fighter in real soon.  Honest.  JV

jho
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485 comments
# 19   Posted: Feb 17 2005, 10:34 PM
longer comments-
I really like how you play the environment, and the drawings are very good too, detailed but not confusing. yay. And I love how the strike have the balls and eyes, and still have brows to express whatever he has in mind :P

maybe the only crits I have in mind is the lack of \'motion\' feeling and some of panel choice kinda clutter the \'jokes\'..... man I don\'t make any sense here.

 and your strike character makes me checking back your old entries.... WHY SO FEW? (love the movie references) do not ever default again.

Wyvern
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# 18   Posted: Feb 17 2005, 10:34 PM
STRIKE WINS!! STRIKE WINS!!!  I friggin\' laughed out loud a few times, you rock my socks.  Great art and writing, joo weeeeeen!

jonas
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# 17   Posted: Feb 17 2005, 09:57 PM
I never knew I missed you, da staykuu..
I still miss ayumi though

Viperchief
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209 comments
# 16   Posted: Feb 17 2005, 09:01 PM
This one made me a big fan of The Strike.  Funny stuff.

(Pi)
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475 comments
# 15   Posted: Feb 17 2005, 08:29 PM
man, andre, that was just what my day needed. You\'re a funny, funny man. Great fight.

Burake
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71 comments
# 14   Posted: Feb 17 2005, 07:45 PM
Poor baby seal.

Awesome battle! It had a great flow of humor. It was very clever I love it!

jho
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485 comments
# 13   Posted: Feb 17 2005, 04:51 PM
shortie defaulted :(

.. haha void high school that\'s grand.

Andre
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5 comments
# 12   Posted: Feb 15 2005, 12:43 PM
Uploaded! Woo hoo! Lets rock!

Kevin Birtcher
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# 11  
oh no it doesn\'t.  I\'m just stupid from lack of sleep... again.  Anywho, good luck to both of you, \'cause you\'ll both need it.

Kevin Birtcher
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289 comments
# 10  
OH MY G.  Come one B, you\'ll get hugs in like... 15 days?!  This battle ends during Katsucon..!

AVT
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62 comments
# 9  
OMG MARLEY OHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhh

Keeks, you almost make me wanna start participating again.  ::jealous of the group hug::

Kevin Birtcher
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289 comments
# 8  
I MISSED YOU BOTH SO MUCH ::weep:: COME ON, GROUP HUG

MaxximumMATT
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84 comments
# 7  
Doth my eyes deceive me? Ayumi?? Strike?? The hotness!! I must see this fight go down. Bring it, foo's!!

mr. robot
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133 comments
# 6  
TIGHT AWESOME!
you both rock! hooray for the return of mr. strike!

Arti
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56 comments
# 5  
oh sweet!

jv7x
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99 comments
# 4  
Ahhhh Yeah!  The Strike is back in action!  Can't wait!!!  JV

Jed
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13 comments
# 3  
OH SHIT. This is going to be so hot, you guys don't even know.

jho
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485 comments
# 2  
OH SHIT AYUMI IS ON. ANDRE TOO.

Good luck.

Phill
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895 comments
# 1  
Oooh, here's a nice little match up! Good luck you two!

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: Feb 24th, 2005
Votes Cast: 26
Page Views: 895
Winner: Andre
 

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