Fushigi vs. Dreazildria
Critiques & Comments
# 30
Charlie: I already submitted it a few days ago xD!
# 29
What? What sounded rude? Was it me? o_o;;; oiiiii.
Yes, i need help in teh entertainment department. I haven't learned to make anything interesting. arugh- how do you people do it?! O__O;;;
Yes, i need help in teh entertainment department. I haven't learned to make anything interesting. arugh- how do you people do it?! O__O;;;
# 28
ooh that sounded rude. No offence drez, its just obvious that fushi's entertainment factor is better than your entry. althoiugh the art and creativity seem pretty balanced.
good luck both of you.
FUSHIGI YOU BETTER FUCKING NAIL YOUR TOURNEY ENTRY OR THE DEEDS TO YOUR HOUSE BELONG TO ME!!!!
good luck both of you.
FUSHIGI YOU BETTER FUCKING NAIL YOUR TOURNEY ENTRY OR THE DEEDS TO YOUR HOUSE BELONG TO ME!!!!
# 27
trp86: awe thanky ^^
and yeah o.o their bouncing around there.
and yeah o.o their bouncing around there.
# 26
We've been balancing off each other in the votes for some time now.
# 25
I agree with shelde, but yeah. My vote's for you, Fushigi. =3
# 24
eh, if I loose, I loose. *shrugs* Nothin I can do about it, I suppose ^^;
# 23
im suprised fushi is losing by so much...
# 22
Thanks everyone. Don't worry, I've been getting some anatomy help now. So I'll do better! As for the nudity, let's say like.. I got like.. you know.. no idea what I was doing because I'm trying to work on the tournament at the same time ( which by the way I haven't even had time to make all thumbnails yet )- DAMN the finals coming up IN 3 DAYS.
# 21
All I have to say is...WTF.
Fushigi, Wonderful Job. I like the few action panels you got. Your work is always great, but you gotta work on your stories a bit. I know it's a real bitch, I have the same problem. =P. I already know you weren't tryin you best, so I won't rag on you more for anything else.
Dreaz, I was looking forward to seeing you pages. You're an improving artist and I've noticed that the last few battles you've had. However, you need, NEED to work on your anatomy and face compositions. I know its a bitch, but...try to stray from that generic anime style...
The story was kinda cute, but I got A tit bit confused. I'm not all that crazy about the last panel. You'd think Fushigi would have more class and wear panties. She needs a neck too. lol. But ah. Work on your anatomy most of all!
Wonderful fight you two!
Fushigi, Wonderful Job. I like the few action panels you got. Your work is always great, but you gotta work on your stories a bit. I know it's a real bitch, I have the same problem. =P. I already know you weren't tryin you best, so I won't rag on you more for anything else.
Dreaz, I was looking forward to seeing you pages. You're an improving artist and I've noticed that the last few battles you've had. However, you need, NEED to work on your anatomy and face compositions. I know its a bitch, but...try to stray from that generic anime style...
The story was kinda cute, but I got A tit bit confused. I'm not all that crazy about the last panel. You'd think Fushigi would have more class and wear panties. She needs a neck too. lol. But ah. Work on your anatomy most of all!
Wonderful fight you two!
# 20
Fush>> You already know what I think about your part of the battle. I still hold it pretty awesome in my eyes. I think your toning was superb, yes, there was a bit here and there with anatomy, but... you rock all around.
Dreaz>> Your art is good in terms of experience. But your anatomy could use quite the work. And I don't really like the fact that it was a one sided battle in your comic. It seemed... God modish, if you please. And the fact that you make your opponent's characters seem like complete idiots doesn't sit well either. Read bios, dear... it gets you closer to the opposing character's personality traits. >>And, we could have definatly done without to nudity to degrade that even further.
But, I do give you the inking. It's very nice, I like the shine on Fushigi's dress. :3
Dreaz>> Your art is good in terms of experience. But your anatomy could use quite the work. And I don't really like the fact that it was a one sided battle in your comic. It seemed... God modish, if you please. And the fact that you make your opponent's characters seem like complete idiots doesn't sit well either. Read bios, dear... it gets you closer to the opposing character's personality traits. >>And, we could have definatly done without to nudity to degrade that even further.
But, I do give you the inking. It's very nice, I like the shine on Fushigi's dress. :3
# 19
I know it jumps from the wings exposing themselves to Fushigi standing up. I ment to put an image where she was hunched over and her wings outfolding, but I didnt have time >.<
# 18
sorry...........technical difficulities............please bear with me
# 17
Fushigi - whooo, good fight, girl! Your stuff was a little wonky anatomy wise occasionally, but you had a pretty good use of tones in there, and I liked the premise to your fight. Plus, you obviously put a lot of work into it, and it shows! Great stuff.
Drez - It was...not really a fight I enjoyed, babe. The premise was sorta stupid, Fushigi did absolutely nothing, and then when you decided to show her completely nekkied at the end (not even panties?) the anatomy was off. I will say that I DID like the inking and your use of blacks quite a bit, you're very good at that. But this didn't feel like your best.
Drez - It was...not really a fight I enjoyed, babe. The premise was sorta stupid, Fushigi did absolutely nothing, and then when you decided to show her completely nekkied at the end (not even panties?) the anatomy was off. I will say that I DID like the inking and your use of blacks quite a bit, you're very good at that. But this didn't feel like your best.
# 16
Fushigi: Interesting story you have going on there with the metal wings and arm. The second last and last pages were my favorite ^__^ It's quite hard to follow what's going on in your pages, though, because both characters look nearly the same. I think your linework could use a little more work in terms of toning, and I don't mean "adding gray screentones to every page". Don't over use screentones. Instead, trying inking the black/dark areas (like Fushigi's hair) for some contrast to the white areas of your pages - they'll help remove that feeling of "emptiness" you get from looking at white pages, and also provide some visual contrast.
Dreaz: the first two pages were impressive, I really like the way you made your pages look contrasting in terms of the inked and white areas. However, the last page was what made me lower my votes for you. I'm sorry to be blunt, but I really don't think that nudity was a necessity to include in your battle. You could have just stripped her down to her clothing just bearly covering her, and it would still be more or less acceptable. Then again, it might be just me since I'm quite against sexual situations being used as an "advantage" in comics.
Still, it was an interesting fight nevertheless; both of you did a good job. Gambatte ne!
Dreaz: the first two pages were impressive, I really like the way you made your pages look contrasting in terms of the inked and white areas. However, the last page was what made me lower my votes for you. I'm sorry to be blunt, but I really don't think that nudity was a necessity to include in your battle. You could have just stripped her down to her clothing just bearly covering her, and it would still be more or less acceptable. Then again, it might be just me since I'm quite against sexual situations being used as an "advantage" in comics.
Still, it was an interesting fight nevertheless; both of you did a good job. Gambatte ne!
# 15
fushigi ur stuff is so good, nice job
# 14
wow what awesome fights from both ends, thumbs up for justice to u both ^^
# 13
haha yours is gonna come up when mine goes down XD; Can't wait to see this!
# 12
good luck to the both of you! <3
Kick it! x3
Kick it! x3
# 11
Fanta5y has an extension
# 10
Submitted. Yay.
# 9
*pounces trp86* kweee! ^__^
Well I'm finished in time. Just... giving it a few tweaks o.o then I submit.
Well I'm finished in time. Just... giving it a few tweaks o.o then I submit.
# 8
ganbatte fushigi-san ^__^
# 7
I just feel like keeping it simple this time. >.>
# 6
typo: eee! *latchu*
# 5
x3 thats alright. I've only been abled to add any words to three pannels >.>;;; ^^;
# 4
^^ Good luck gals..
# 3
Omg, I haven't felt like drawing for several days now. omg. I'm gonna lose., >_>
# 2
Good luck to you Fanta5y! ^^ I'll try my best
# 1
I'll try to do my best on this! HAAAAIIYA!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
3 weeks
Ended:
Jan 21st, 2005
Votes Cast:
30
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1249
Winner:
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