Fushigi vs. Dreazildria

Fushigi vs. Dreazildria

by Kii

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by Fanta5y

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Icon for Dreazildria44.6%
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Whirlwind04
Artist
21 comments
# 31  
Fushigi has this battle won!

Kii
Artist
122 comments
# 30  
Charlie: I already submitted it a few days ago xD!

Fanta5y
Artist
31 comments
# 29  
What? What sounded rude? Was it me? o_o;;; oiiiii.

Yes, i need help in teh entertainment department. I haven't learned to make anything interesting. arugh- how do you people do it?! O__O;;;

sheldon
Artist
141 comments
# 28  
ooh that sounded rude. No offence drez, its just obvious that fushi's entertainment factor is  better than your entry. althoiugh the art and creativity seem pretty balanced.

good luck both of you.

FUSHIGI YOU BETTER FUCKING NAIL YOUR TOURNEY ENTRY OR THE DEEDS TO YOUR HOUSE BELONG TO ME!!!!

Kii
Artist
122 comments
# 27  
trp86: awe thanky ^^

and yeah o.o their bouncing around there.

Fanta5y
Artist
31 comments
# 26  
We've been balancing off each other in the votes for some time now.

PTPS
Artist
60 comments
# 25  
I agree with shelde, but yeah. My vote's for you, Fushigi. =3

Kii
Artist
122 comments
# 24  
eh, if I loose, I loose. *shrugs* Nothin I can do about it, I suppose ^^;

sheldon
Artist
141 comments
# 23  
im suprised fushi is losing by so much...

Fanta5y
Artist
31 comments
# 22  
Thanks everyone. Don't worry, I've been getting some anatomy help now. So I'll do better! As for the nudity, let's say like.. I got like.. you know.. no idea what I was doing because I'm trying to work on the tournament at the same time ( which by the way I haven't even had time to make all thumbnails yet )- DAMN the finals coming up IN 3 DAYS.

luniara
Artist
528 comments
# 21  
All I have to say is...WTF.
Fushigi, Wonderful Job. I like the few action panels you got. Your work is always great, but you gotta work on your stories a bit. I know it's a real bitch, I have the same problem. =P. I already  know you weren't tryin you best, so I won't rag on you more for anything else.

Dreaz,  I was looking forward to seeing you pages.  You're an improving artist and I've noticed that the last few battles you've had. However, you need, NEED to work on your anatomy and face compositions. I know its a bitch, but...try to stray from that generic anime style...
The story was kinda cute, but I got A tit bit confused. I'm not all that crazy about the last panel. You'd think Fushigi would have more class and wear panties. She needs a neck too. lol. But ah. Work on your anatomy most of all!

Wonderful fight you two!

enjeru
10 comments
# 20  
Fush>> You already know what I think about your part of the battle. I still hold it pretty awesome in my eyes. I think your toning was superb, yes, there was a bit here and there with anatomy, but... you rock all around.

Dreaz>> Your art is good in terms of experience. But your anatomy could use quite the work. And I don't really like the fact that it was a one sided battle in your comic. It seemed... God modish, if you please. And the fact that you make your opponent's characters seem like complete idiots doesn't sit well either. Read bios, dear... it gets you closer to the opposing character's personality traits. >>And, we could have definatly done without to nudity to degrade that even further.
But, I do give you the inking. It's very nice, I like the shine on Fushigi's dress. :3

Kii
Artist
122 comments
# 19  
I know it jumps from the wings exposing themselves to Fushigi standing up.  I ment to put an image where she was hunched over and her wings outfolding, but I didnt have time >.<

Wei Ingnan
Artist
597 comments
# 18  
sorry...........technical difficulities............please bear with me

Wyvern
Artist
179 comments
# 17  
Fushigi - whooo, good fight, girl!  Your stuff was a little wonky anatomy wise occasionally, but you had a pretty good use of tones in there, and I liked the premise to your fight.  Plus, you obviously put a lot of work into it, and it shows!  Great stuff.
Drez - It was...not really a fight I enjoyed, babe.  The premise was sorta stupid, Fushigi did absolutely nothing, and then when you decided to show her completely nekkied at the end (not even panties?) the anatomy was off.  I will say that I DID like the inking and your use of blacks quite a bit, you're very good at that.  But this didn't feel like your best.

PTPS
Artist
60 comments
# 16  
Fushigi: Interesting story you have going on there with the metal wings and arm. The second last and last pages were my favorite ^__^ It's quite hard to follow what's going on in your pages, though, because both characters look nearly the same. I think your linework could use a little more work in terms of toning, and I don't mean "adding gray screentones to every page". Don't over use screentones. Instead, trying inking the black/dark areas (like Fushigi's hair) for some contrast to the white areas of your pages - they'll help remove that feeling of "emptiness" you get from looking at white pages, and also provide some visual contrast.

Dreaz: the first two pages were impressive, I really like the way you made your pages look contrasting in terms of the inked and white areas. However, the last page was what made me lower my votes for you. I'm sorry to be blunt, but I really don't think that nudity was a necessity to include in your battle. You could have just stripped her down to her clothing just bearly covering her, and it would still be more or less acceptable. Then again, it might be just me since I'm quite against sexual situations being used as an "advantage" in comics.

Still, it was an interesting fight nevertheless; both of you did a good job. Gambatte ne!

dama
30 comments
# 15  
fushigi ur stuff is so good, nice job

the kid
Artist
31 comments
# 14  
wow what awesome fights from both ends, thumbs up for justice to u both ^^

PTPS
Artist
60 comments
# 13  
haha yours is gonna come up when mine goes down XD; Can't wait to see this!

enjeru
10 comments
# 12  
good luck to the both of you! <3
Kick it! x3

Wei Ingnan
Artist
597 comments
# 11  
Fanta5y has an extension

Kii
Artist
122 comments
# 10  
Submitted.   Yay.  

Kii
Artist
122 comments
# 9  
*pounces trp86* kweee! ^__^  

Well I'm finished in time. Just... giving it a few tweaks o.o then I submit.

PTPS
Artist
60 comments
# 8  
ganbatte fushigi-san ^__^

Kii
Artist
122 comments
# 7  
I just feel like keeping it simple this time. >.>

Kii
Artist
122 comments
# 6  
typo: eee! *latchu*

Kii
Artist
122 comments
# 5  
x3 thats alright. I've only been abled to add any words to three pannels >.>;;; ^^;

TypoDemon
Artist
144 comments
# 4  
^^ Good luck gals..

Fanta5y
Artist
31 comments
# 3  
Omg, I haven't felt like drawing for several days now. omg. I'm gonna lose., >_>

Kii
Artist
122 comments
# 2  
Good luck to you Fanta5y! ^^ I'll try my best

Fanta5y
Artist
31 comments
# 1  
I'll try to do my best on this! HAAAAIIYA!

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Regular Match
Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: Jan 21st, 2005
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Winner: Kii
 

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