Lune vs. Jamie Chase
Critiques & Comments
ugthemc
4 comments
# 20
Posted:
Mar 29 2005, 05:38 PM
I think the city scene on luniaras first page was beautiful
# 19
Despite you both saying you didn't put much effort into these i like them both alot. Am sorry there was no whupping in Jamie's.. and i'd have loved to see Luni's colors again.. but i like them both none the less.
# 18
Jamie did a great job..but Lunie is too much
# 17
yes he got old form something i will talk about in the next fight...im sorry that its crappy but my and my girl broke up and stuff happen so i had a week to do this before i left the place and i couldnt upload it.
good job lunewish it was colored...lol so you know your char with be in the next 3 fights of jamie..:-p and maybe even the hunter beyond story to show how they know each other and all...lots to plane...lol
thanks all that says what they said
good job lunewish it was colored...lol so you know your char with be in the next 3 fights of jamie..:-p and maybe even the hunter beyond story to show how they know each other and all...lots to plane...lol
thanks all that says what they said
# 16
both sides are good...
lune i did not like the bought city scape... thats so cheating hahaha. I know you were busy, so ill cut you some slack. Wasn't too impressed on this one
Man of Danger- You put a good amount of effort into this one. If it weren't for the fact that I see abbey chase in all of your female faces, I would be pretty down with it. I'm glad you're working in vencil's abomination. Although he got old pretty quick?
lune i did not like the bought city scape... thats so cheating hahaha. I know you were busy, so ill cut you some slack. Wasn't too impressed on this one
Man of Danger- You put a good amount of effort into this one. If it weren't for the fact that I see abbey chase in all of your female faces, I would be pretty down with it. I'm glad you're working in vencil's abomination. Although he got old pretty quick?
# 15
haha, god yes I know fushie. That last page was like- ARouuahahhh.
# 14
Looks awesom both of you! *clap* Nice toning, Lune, and nice coloring MoD! X3
Though theres not alot of Lune in MoD's battle, and yes, Lune, the last page is kinda.. o.o simple XD Still good :3
Though theres not alot of Lune in MoD's battle, and yes, Lune, the last page is kinda.. o.o simple XD Still good :3
# 13
good fight both u guys
but ill go with Jamie's entry for this one, i didnt find lune's fight enjoyable... ;_;... it wasnt creative or anything, the tones on the last page were a bitch too! almost spazmed at the sight. and i really dont know why a person who wants to recruit another would go around stalking and pointing a gun. but i know u got hurricanes so ill cut u some slach this time
Jamie's entry was more thought out, the text threw me off just a little bit, but it didnt bother me, i loved the flashback-ish intro and the colors were'nt too bad. great work Manofdanger! looking forward to seeing vencils bastard in action! XD
but ill go with Jamie's entry for this one, i didnt find lune's fight enjoyable... ;_;... it wasnt creative or anything, the tones on the last page were a bitch too! almost spazmed at the sight. and i really dont know why a person who wants to recruit another would go around stalking and pointing a gun. but i know u got hurricanes so ill cut u some slach this time
Jamie's entry was more thought out, the text threw me off just a little bit, but it didnt bother me, i loved the flashback-ish intro and the colors were'nt too bad. great work Manofdanger! looking forward to seeing vencils bastard in action! XD
# 12
Sorry bout the wait,guys. Those fuckin hurricanes are a bitch. I totally lost interest in the pages towards the end, and I'm sure it shows. Ah well.
# 11
I know a hurricane was heading her way and she was planning on evacuating when it came.. that would account for Lune being late. I'll be sorry if i miss her hot artwork though.
# 10
Luck! ....err....i meant luck!
# 9
Good job to both of you! I'm very eager to see where both characters stories go. *o*
# 8
Hurry Lune! get 'er done!
# 7
im sorry mine is crap but im going through something with my girl, and i hav eto move out on teh due date, and was a little depressed before that, so i draw something in the matter of like 4 days..again im sorry that its crappy and all but i will be takeing the story to the next fight and the one after that too....so at lease i get some story out there...lol thanks lune for teh fight too i hope i get online again to challenge you again...hunter is waiting for you...lol
# 6
Lunaria has been granted an extention
# 5
GO LUNE!!!!! *latch*
# 4
Fuck ideas,manodanga- just give me your best, and try your best! <3 you'll do a fine job
# 3
my 3rd this last month:-p lol i got no good ideas so please forgive the crappy job that this fight might be...lol
# 2
3rd Fight, HOOT! dun dun dunnn! letttttttttttttts gooooooo
# 1
Wow... so far not a singal comment... might as well be the first then... Only I really don't know what to say o_o;
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
4 weeks
Ended:
Oct 13th, 2004
Votes Cast:
21
Page Views:
1599
Winner:
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