Queen Of Cheese / Sirloin Steak

Queen Of Cheese — Sirloin Steak

by Raltz

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Oh my god it’s the lore
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Batty
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# 3   Posted: Mar 2 2024, 07:11 PM
Oooh lore!! I will say the screen tone effect looks much better with color on top of it, and I enjoy the sort of painterly vibe the colors have.
I'm torn, though, because on the one hand there's nothing wrong with a short and simple comic and this is definitely a cute little peek into Sirloin's past, but on the other hand I feel like this comic was just a tad too simplistic? the comic is just four panels long (five if you count the last page as a panel) and not too much happens--we learn that Sirloin's mom was a demon, and I guess that she's always love cheese, though the cheese thing has been pretty well established throughout the rest of your comics. I feel like I would've liked just a little bit more; maybe Sirloin's mom trying to convince her to eat something else before giving up?
But! For a small comic, I think you did a good job of getting your idea across, and I'm interested in seeing what happened with Sirloin's mom.

Pizza Man
Artist
79 comments
# 2   Posted: Feb 27 2024, 09:12 AM
Im commenting on this using the 3DS! Did Sirloin just get fed a block of cheese? The plot thickens! One day we'll find out her favorite cheese O:

Bobert
Artist
250 comments
# 1   Posted: Feb 27 2024, 03:04 AM
Woa sweet mama lama jama! Sirloin steak has a demon mama!

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