RedBlood Phill vs. Magician W.
Critiques & Comments
# 31
Mar, gabe asked yuyi if he was saying he got help, or he just learned from him. yuyi answered. Im not trying to be mean, but maybe just read a little better befire you make a statement that sounds like you are pissed or something. Gabe did ask him, and he answered. no reason to be upset. Breath and keep drawing that new vampire chicka. she rules.
# 30
a rematch!? ahh fucking YEAH!
# 29
Hmm... still the same score from yesterday (but that doesn't mean it won't change ) Yuyi... I don't think it's the messyness of your lines... I think it's the lines in general, you need to have a good balance of thick and thin lines to describe details. I also think Magician W needs more personality inside of him, just having him say he's a "Hero who's praised by other heros" doens't say a lot about his inner feelings and how he acts. I've got a propatision for ya, let me know who you plan on fighting next then contact me via AIM: redbloodphill, if possible, I can make the Magician a bit more likable than he is right now.
Oh, Dan, I haven't seen Clearks X just yet (saw the commercials) but I have seen the movie, and the cartoon a couple of times before, there is a slight usage of one of the emotions the animator of that show used before (look at the very angry Magician W and you'll see that his eyes have a thick black outline around them). BTW, I appreciate the critiques from everybody, but let me just say that.... I have yet to bring my best to the table . Win or lose Yuyitron (don't assume either of us can win yet)... a rematch in the future will happen.
Oh, Dan, I haven't seen Clearks X just yet (saw the commercials) but I have seen the movie, and the cartoon a couple of times before, there is a slight usage of one of the emotions the animator of that show used before (look at the very angry Magician W and you'll see that his eyes have a thick black outline around them). BTW, I appreciate the critiques from everybody, but let me just say that.... I have yet to bring my best to the table . Win or lose Yuyitron (don't assume either of us can win yet)... a rematch in the future will happen.
# 28
Yuyitron all gabe was asking was whether or not you communicate with him. Like talk to him in person or on the net. He wasn't saying that KR did the work for you
# 27
Galv..Kr just teach me skills and tips for sure he don't DO WORK for others, i learned coloring with books and tutorials tryng to make an "image look style"
# 26
OH! and phil, ive been watching the new Clerks X dvds the last few days, and the bottom of your page 2, "ooooh, a maaaaagic waaaand! poooooowers!" and phil making the funny sarcasm face reminded me so much of Randal making fun of dante! I laughed out loud. haha, just thought you should know.
# 25
Yuyitron, lol, the void elephants were the shit man. I will admit, I wasnt too fond of your first battle, and thought maybe you were off to a little bit of a rocky start. You impressed me with this one though with flying colors. Your art has improved very much so, and I love your sleek more cat-like rendition of Phil. I had a bit of trouble with some of the text/ grammar stuff, but the art pulled me through the whole thing, I almost didnt need an explaination of what was happening after page 2. Very cool man, and sorry I ever doubted you.
Phil, also sweet. not the BIGGEST fan of your style, but im not counting that against you. Loved the Sydney cameo, and I love the way your coloring looks. Some people may not like it the best, but I think it adds a lot altogether.
Over all, awesome job to both.
Phil, also sweet. not the BIGGEST fan of your style, but im not counting that against you. Loved the Sydney cameo, and I love the way your coloring looks. Some people may not like it the best, but I think it adds a lot altogether.
Over all, awesome job to both.
# 24
yuyi wins cus hes got fucking ELEPHANTS!
# 23
yuyi... are you ASKING for KR's help or are you saying he helps you?
hey man, i speak spanish.. if you DO need help IM me on aim or msn
aim:galvosaur
msn:galviin@hotmail.com
hey man, i speak spanish.. if you DO need help IM me on aim or msn
aim:galvosaur
msn:galviin@hotmail.com
# 22
KR teach me skills about coloring and give me tips.
# 21
This battle is almost an even match up
Yuyitron - You have improved A LOT since you first started on Void. I can see you're making an effort to imitate bacardi's coloring. You still have a long way, but it is an improvement. You really need to work on your battle angles. Your anatomy isn't very consistant, but you have some good shots here and there. On your first page.. the girl on the left has an odd look to her. Her face is kind if disproportionate... almost as if she were looking into one of those wavy circus mirrors that change your shape. Sometimes Magician's face looks all kinds of wierd, but at least you are making an attempt to have style and add angles. Makes it more entertaining to look at. You really need someone to go over your text though... Where are you from? If you speak spanish, I'm sure there are some bilingual people on the site who can help.
Phill - I respect that you color by hand. I color by hand preferably also, but I have to say. Its boring to look at. Your pages were readable and constructed, but they were really plain. Its like you used a coloring book. There is no dynamic lighting, or any attempt at angles. You have to work on your hands and feet. The anatomy is almost bloated. Those rounded noses, and lidless eyes do nothing for me. You have everything constructed, but now you really need to work on the technicalities... perspective in your backgrounds, anatomy, light sourcing. You're taking art classes this semester right? That should help some
I consider this match to be a draw, but thats just my opinion. Keep up the good work guys
Yuyitron - You have improved A LOT since you first started on Void. I can see you're making an effort to imitate bacardi's coloring. You still have a long way, but it is an improvement. You really need to work on your battle angles. Your anatomy isn't very consistant, but you have some good shots here and there. On your first page.. the girl on the left has an odd look to her. Her face is kind if disproportionate... almost as if she were looking into one of those wavy circus mirrors that change your shape. Sometimes Magician's face looks all kinds of wierd, but at least you are making an attempt to have style and add angles. Makes it more entertaining to look at. You really need someone to go over your text though... Where are you from? If you speak spanish, I'm sure there are some bilingual people on the site who can help.
Phill - I respect that you color by hand. I color by hand preferably also, but I have to say. Its boring to look at. Your pages were readable and constructed, but they were really plain. Its like you used a coloring book. There is no dynamic lighting, or any attempt at angles. You have to work on your hands and feet. The anatomy is almost bloated. Those rounded noses, and lidless eyes do nothing for me. You have everything constructed, but now you really need to work on the technicalities... perspective in your backgrounds, anatomy, light sourcing. You're taking art classes this semester right? That should help some
I consider this match to be a draw, but thats just my opinion. Keep up the good work guys
# 20
phill you did a real great story! and your art is great . I spend a lot , lot , lot of time cleaning my work to avoid that "very very messy" art that you said i have ,and people are voting in this fight for my job
# 19
In case most of you happen to be blind... I did use colored pencils for my comic (is that a sin or something?) and I believe yuyi used a computer for his coloring job.
# 18
For real Yuyitron, you have to have someone who speaks english read over your comic and check for language errors. I really really like your art, it has a certain drama to it. I like how you depicted Phil. The bout was pretty good and had decent humor. Good colours as well.
Phil...Awesome awesome humor. I really can't comprehend how you can complete a 6 page comic all in pencil crayons and make it look decent. I enjoyed reading the comic and I'll be looking forward to your next one.
Phil...Awesome awesome humor. I really can't comprehend how you can complete a 6 page comic all in pencil crayons and make it look decent. I enjoyed reading the comic and I'll be looking forward to your next one.
# 17
yuyi u were doing good with your english for the first couple of pages, then i dunno what happened. Both you guys did good. I liked Yuyi's colorings better though. Having said that, i was diggin phils comic the most overall. it was pretty damn c lose tho.
# 16
people .. that comment was mine.. i just forgot to log out my cousing.. so again sorry about the grammar.. next time i'll find a teacher.. or something.. suerte
# 15
great fight guys
yuyitron, good stuff, but u need to pay attention to your english. also the action is kinda hard to make out, sometimes ur just too zoomed in or smth
phlipc, what can i say, nice stuff man, totally dig ur colors. good story and nice flow.
if i were to say anything, it would be to try and get more dynamic angles. but still good fight ppl
yuyitron, good stuff, but u need to pay attention to your english. also the action is kinda hard to make out, sometimes ur just too zoomed in or smth
phlipc, what can i say, nice stuff man, totally dig ur colors. good story and nice flow.
if i were to say anything, it would be to try and get more dynamic angles. but still good fight ppl
# 14
Actually Nykilz (quite the name you've chosen) Toast just said he has my pages, and Yuyi basicly purchessed an extention due to a busted scanner... So we're both done!
# 13
Im gonna vote on this battle, ive looked at both charrie's profiles and both are good, even though yuyi has better winning streak. But that could change, who knows. I really like Phill's charrie, i dig cats. Hope both get ur works in on time. Good luck
# 12
Yuyi has an extension, and I got Phill's by email
# 11
I sent my pages to toast! I hope you're ready with your pages Yuyi.
# 10
Hey I'm almost done with my side of the fight, though I am in search of a more reliable pen (Microns are good and all... but so far my microns can't take the heat) so chances are the last pages will be done with a sharpie like my fight with Mr. Kick (in other words... the line art won't look so great!).
BTW: I'm also working on a new design and look for my character... I'll post a concept sheet in the forums as soon as possible so that I can improve even further on my character! Good luck Yuyi... you'll need it
BTW: I'm also working on a new design and look for my character... I'll post a concept sheet in the forums as soon as possible so that I can improve even further on my character! Good luck Yuyi... you'll need it
# 9
lol phillip is out for blood!! <3 I'm rootin for yeh Phil!
# 8
well i ask for an extension Phill.. No default win by me promise!
# 7
Whatever happened to RedBlood Phill vs Mr. Kick?
# 6
i have a scanner problem.. so notify if you will pick an extension..cause i think i need it too
# 5
I've got 3 pages left for me to do (other 3 just need an inking) so if by day 4 I'm not done, I'm calling for an extention so that I can polish up my comic (not defaulting anytime soon!). Wish me luck guys and gals!
# 4
I do, sorta like what Gryphon did, I'm making sort of a huge storyline thing for my character. I thought Yuyi didn't want to accept my chalange so I began my other fight with Seel.
# 3
You seem really eagar for this Phil...Like you already had something in mind.
# 2
sorry for the late but i didn't view my profile.
# 1
Hmph! Took ya long enough, too long if you ask me! Alrighty! You'd better be ready for the worst!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
4 weeks
Ended:
Sep 15th, 2004
Votes Cast:
27
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1459
Winner:
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