oooooo... first of all, i don't know why he's arresting people, but whatever. your style is really very weird and cool, kainsword. i dig the character exaggeration, it works a lot better for you than i've seen in a lot of mangas. why no color, man?? both of these guys are so bright and gaudy, i thought color would be impossible to resist. keep up the work and improving.

Kainsword17: I agree with everything that has so far been said....especially that you are improving with each match....but one thing I feel should be said that hasn't is that more time could be spent on your matches....I know how fast you are whipping these off cuz I see when you upload them........take a little more care and effort with your work and it will payoff...you already have tons of energy and dynamics(somthing I tend to lack at times) now you just have to build on that

Robot: you too are improving greatly....and I have to agree that this is one has a better look(although I did enjoy the cross hatching)...just continue to build using your strengths as a base

ou! daku, I'm proud of you!  your work is getting better and better in each fight! Now, just work on your composition and paneling and ya got it owned! <3. Traveler, good fight yo, you improved as well, I prefer this style over the sketchy shading one. Great fight to both of you!

Daku : Your anatomy is getting better, but your main concern right now should be frame composition. It's either your frames are too big with too much open space or too small with not enough content. Take into consideration pacing and direction when arranging your panels and you'll improve greatly.

Traveler : Agreed, this is your best battle yet. Crisp colors, clean lines, and I love how the historic date for his weapons appears whenever he draws one; a very stylistic touch ^_^. Keep up the good work !

Intresting... another short but sweet one comming up!!

Kainsword: You are improving, though I would like to see less fireball fighting fireball in the future if you know what I mean. Anatomy still needs work, but you can work on all of this.

Robot: Like I said earlier, you need backgrounds! That and Daku looked more human than buglike in your half of the fight. Other than that I really can't say.

Some work needed, but good nontheless! Keep it up or something?

I agree with you dude. This is your best yet... great job robot! I'm really impressed. also keep it up daku! you get better every fight

And Good luck to you too

well, mine's uploaded, and i think it's my best yet. good luck mr. kainsword.