Nightmares and Prophecy / Yamato and Dairyu

Nightmares and Prophecy — Yamato and Dairyu

by Snowy

This comic has been rated suitable for all ages by its creator(s)

Icon for YamatoIcon for Dairyu
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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
Follow up comic directly after Dairyu vs. Oblivia.

Note: Yamato has several different universes that he has existed in, each vastly different from the last, so how his surroundings look and how his past was can vary. His personality stays the same though!
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Snowy
Artist
242 comments
# 9   Posted: Jun 9 2023, 12:01 AM
Thank you so much, everyone! I'm glad people are interested in the stories I've been writing - I know my writing hasn't always been great, so I'm trying to improve that to make more compelling stories! Thank you for reading and providing feedback, it's always so appreciated!

Animeshen
Artist
1490 comments
# 8   Posted: Jun 8 2023, 07:08 AM
i love the beautiful washed-out greys of the backgrounds. Its a beautifully drawn, very SAD story! Poor Yamato chasing his grief-riddled, mad mom through the multiverse, what a terrible fate for that boy. And the sane version doesn't even recognize him. I hope he can be happier in this universe! Lovely comic!

Bobert
Artist
249 comments
# 7   Posted: Jun 6 2023, 08:02 AM
A big strength of this comic is how it felt longer due to each of the 4 pages having a lot of substance in them. It's also nice to see more of Dairyus and Yamatos characterisation being expounded upon.

Petrichor
Artist
107 comments
# 6   Posted: Jun 5 2023, 12:23 PM
Whoa, your inks keep getting better and better!! This bw style always looks so good and matched the story's atmosphere perfectly.
It's so sad to know that there's a version of Yamato out there chasing after an enraged Dairyu, hoping she comes to her senses just to be pushed away over and over...
I hope our Dairyu can do something about it and ensure that her family doesn't have to face the same fate in this universe... :'0

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
568 comments
# 5   Posted: Jun 4 2023, 11:40 AM
God this hits the feels hard. I love this! From the story to the delicious inks and use of tones.
This is such a fantastic comic! I think this is one of your best comics yet!
Tying together different alternate universes, Dairyu seeing what possible futures there are and that request from Yamato. I want this version of their family to have the best outcome!!! No sad only happy!
okay maybe a lil sad, but in the end happy!

Putrid
Artist
206 comments
# 4   Posted: Jun 2 2023, 07:26 PM
Goddamn! The inks here were absolutely incredible- I think they are my favorite inks from you so far, Snowy!
The story was very melancholic, bittersweet but I really like that there's still some hope in it

This was such a wonderful comic Snowy! Your hard work really shines on this one!!

IItherockmanII
Artist
183 comments
# 3   Posted: Jun 2 2023, 03:34 PM
I love these stories of multiple realities and timelines, the plot was interesting and felt real!
Excellent job Snowy, I see lots of improvement on your work!

Goldie
Artist
100 comments
# 2   Posted: Jun 2 2023, 02:58 PM
I'm thoroughly impressed with your inks and storytelling here Snowy! Truly I felt Yamato's emotions as he looked on at the alternate Dairyu, having basically lost his mother ; ;
This was a short and sweet perfect treat! I can't wait to see more from you!

Platinumartist
Approval Committee
177 comments
# 1   Posted: Jun 1 2023, 11:59 PM
Strong Inks and Beautiful backgrounds as always.

I really like how you are still using Yamato and this leaves a lot for Dairyu in terms of character growth. I'm excited to see where you will take their story next

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