Nightmares and Prophecy / Yamato and Dairyu
Critiques & Comments
# 8
Posted:
Jun 8 2023, 07:08 AM
i love the beautiful washed-out greys of the backgrounds. Its a beautifully drawn, very SAD story! Poor Yamato chasing his grief-riddled, mad mom through the multiverse, what a terrible fate for that boy. And the sane version doesn't even recognize him. I hope he can be happier in this universe! Lovely comic!
# 7
Posted:
Jun 6 2023, 08:02 AM
A big strength of this comic is how it felt longer due to each of the 4 pages having a lot of substance in them. It's also nice to see more of Dairyus and Yamatos characterisation being expounded upon.
# 6
Posted:
Jun 5 2023, 12:23 PM
Whoa, your inks keep getting better and better!! This bw style always looks so good and matched the story's atmosphere perfectly.
It's so sad to know that there's a version of Yamato out there chasing after an enraged Dairyu, hoping she comes to her senses just to be pushed away over and over...
I hope our Dairyu can do something about it and ensure that her family doesn't have to face the same fate in this universe... :'0
It's so sad to know that there's a version of Yamato out there chasing after an enraged Dairyu, hoping she comes to her senses just to be pushed away over and over...
I hope our Dairyu can do something about it and ensure that her family doesn't have to face the same fate in this universe... :'0
# 5
Posted:
Jun 4 2023, 11:40 AM
God this hits the feels hard. I love this! From the story to the delicious inks and use of tones.
This is such a fantastic comic! I think this is one of your best comics yet!
Tying together different alternate universes, Dairyu seeing what possible futures there are and that request from Yamato. I want this version of their family to have the best outcome!!! No sad only happy!
okay maybe a lil sad, but in the end happy!
This is such a fantastic comic! I think this is one of your best comics yet!
Tying together different alternate universes, Dairyu seeing what possible futures there are and that request from Yamato. I want this version of their family to have the best outcome!!! No sad only happy!
okay maybe a lil sad, but in the end happy!
# 4
Posted:
Jun 2 2023, 07:26 PM
Goddamn! The inks here were absolutely incredible- I think they are my favorite inks from you so far, Snowy!
The story was very melancholic, bittersweet but I really like that there's still some hope in it
This was such a wonderful comic Snowy! Your hard work really shines on this one!!
The story was very melancholic, bittersweet but I really like that there's still some hope in it
This was such a wonderful comic Snowy! Your hard work really shines on this one!!
# 3
Posted:
Jun 2 2023, 03:34 PM
I love these stories of multiple realities and timelines, the plot was interesting and felt real!
Excellent job Snowy, I see lots of improvement on your work!
Excellent job Snowy, I see lots of improvement on your work!
# 2
Posted:
Jun 2 2023, 02:58 PM
I'm thoroughly impressed with your inks and storytelling here Snowy! Truly I felt Yamato's emotions as he looked on at the alternate Dairyu, having basically lost his mother ; ;
This was a short and sweet perfect treat! I can't wait to see more from you!
This was a short and sweet perfect treat! I can't wait to see more from you!
# 1
Posted:
Jun 1 2023, 11:59 PM
Strong Inks and Beautiful backgrounds as always.
I really like how you are still using Yamato and this leaves a lot for Dairyu in terms of character growth. I'm excited to see where you will take their story next
I really like how you are still using Yamato and this leaves a lot for Dairyu in terms of character growth. I'm excited to see where you will take their story next
Beyond Battle
Drawing Time:
2 weeks
Ended:
Jun 8th, 2023
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