Intro Story / EVA No. 100

Intro Story — EVA No. 100

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Fluffsamasprime
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570 comments
# 7   Posted: Mar 25 2023, 11:45 AM
Eva finally in!!! Congrats! Also wonderful comic, can't wait to see more!

Bobert
Artist
250 comments
# 6   Posted: Mar 22 2023, 06:35 AM
Hell yeah! Let's see you get into fights on here and have fun!

Flytee
Community Manager
353 comments
# 5   Posted: Mar 22 2023, 01:32 AM
HECK YEAH! I love Eva! Really great design and buckets of personality.
I'm thrilled to see someone take advantage of the new intro page limit, you used it really well and laid down a great foundation for this character. Welcome aboard.

IItherockmanII
Artist
185 comments
# 4   Posted: Mar 21 2023, 01:47 PM
Glad to have Eva join the fray! Welcome Verum!

Petrichor
Artist
107 comments
# 3   Posted: Mar 21 2023, 12:24 PM
Eva is here!!
I'm loving how expressive and so full of personality your characters are, and can't wait to know more about them!
This is a good first intro dude
Welcome to Void!

Firefly
Artist
72 comments
# 2   Posted: Mar 21 2023, 11:50 AM
Eva looks like a fun character! You set up her personality well here and I look forward to seeing what you do with her! I agree with Snowy that the action and angles are all done well. One criticism I'd like to add, is to experiment with your word bubbles a bit, the rectangular shape of them makes them feel rigid and robotic. This works for the Broadcaster, but I don't feel like it does for Eva. Overall this is a strong intro comic and welcome to Void!

Snowy
Artist
244 comments
# 1   Posted: Mar 21 2023, 08:25 AM
Love the intro! The action is super fun, and the angles all add to the story being told! My only suggestion is practicing with line width to differentiate between the foreground and background a bit more. I'm excited to see the stories you have planned!

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