Intro Story / Craig and Cygnus

Intro Story — Craig and Cygnus

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# 5   Posted: Feb 18 2023, 10:54 AM
I love these two, I really want to see more of their dynamic and also where the story is going with Kurt and the docks!

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# 4   Posted: Feb 18 2023, 12:29 AM
Interesting characters, I like their dynamic! Always like seeing some super close and supportive buds. Cygnus' design calls to me, I love little goblin dudes lol.
For crit, I think the background on the first page could be more developed; I didn't realize Craig's in a bathtub (or a bathroom) until page 2. Maybe it's intentionally hazy at first since he's lost in his thoughts, but there's still some indication of the tub. For something like this, I think it would be best to either intentionally lean into the haziness of the background and make your intent super clear, or just make the tub a little more readable so we can see where he's sitting. The last page is really fun, I like how the shading is super different, it really gives it an impact. I'm interested in what these characters will get up to and I wanna see Craig's powers in action sometime! Looking forward to more!

# 3   Posted: Feb 17 2023, 04:03 AM
Excited to see what you do with them in the future!

# 2   Posted: Feb 15 2023, 07:14 PM
I'm really interested to see where the story goes next! Craig and Cygnus have a nice dynamic going on, and they both have distinctive personalities that meld well together. The expressions and character designs are also top notch.

# 1   Posted: Feb 14 2023, 12:09 PM
awww craig....i'm glad cygnus is there to support him and help pull him out of his self-loathing a little...excited to read more about these two! Also all these expressions are GRAND

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