Snowy:
I'm always a fan of how soft and pretty everything you draw is!! Everything has such a nice flowy quality to it, and I really love the brush you chose for the lines. The warm golden tone you used to color things is also very pleasant to look at, and you're really good at knowing where to put that color and where to leave it white. I think my only crit art-wise is that I got a little confused on page 8 when Dairyu says that Greece and Jaja are ignoring her; I think it's because their eyes seem like they're pointing towards where Dairyu is, and Greece's statement seems as if it's in response to Dairyu--especially since, before Dairyu, he was the last one to say anything, so I'm not sure who else he could be responding to? Other than that, visually this was a beautiful comic and was v pleasing to look at 
Story-wise, I like this route that you chose, of telling how Dairyu sets up her little haven! It felt like a nice journey, and I really loved Cam's role in this, as a sort of mediator! I'll agree with what some of the others said, that the conflict between Dairyu and the werewolves seemed a bit forced, like conflict for the sake of conflict, and certain characters felt out of place in the role you had to have them in. It's definitely a hard balance to strike, though, between keeping true to a character and telling the story you need! In the end, it wasn't too jarring, though, and imo it was absolutely worth it in the end. I especially loved the idea of Jozzik having a studio set in the Misty Oasis, and I really love the path this is setting Dairyu on. I cannot wait to see her grow even further

Story-wise, I like this route that you chose, of telling how Dairyu sets up her little haven! It felt like a nice journey, and I really loved Cam's role in this, as a sort of mediator! I'll agree with what some of the others said, that the conflict between Dairyu and the werewolves seemed a bit forced, like conflict for the sake of conflict, and certain characters felt out of place in the role you had to have them in. It's definitely a hard balance to strike, though, between keeping true to a character and telling the story you need! In the end, it wasn't too jarring, though, and imo it was absolutely worth it in the end. I especially loved the idea of Jozzik having a studio set in the Misty Oasis, and I really love the path this is setting Dairyu on. I cannot wait to see her grow even further

Shen:
Yours made me actually cackle out loud several times! I had a big stupid grin on my face the whole time I was reading, especially with the through-line of Greece being like "OH HELL YES I'M GOOD AT THIS, I GOT THIS" and then whoops he don't got this XDD ngl tho I think the part that got me hardest was the reveal of Jozzik in a trenchcoat, that shit had me wheezing
I think my only note for improvement is that I wish the "debate" questions had been more consistent throughout; not sure why, but the fact that it was missing from the middle games threw me off, lol
Art-wise, I don't really have much to say that hasn't been said already: loved the goofy expressions, and you're always so good at spot blacks! Some of the panels were a bit tight/crowded, but tbh I didn't find that too distracting.
I think my only note for improvement is that I wish the "debate" questions had been more consistent throughout; not sure why, but the fact that it was missing from the middle games threw me off, lol
Art-wise, I don't really have much to say that hasn't been said already: loved the goofy expressions, and you're always so good at spot blacks! Some of the panels were a bit tight/crowded, but tbh I didn't find that too distracting.
Footini:
I gotta say, this is extremely different from what I was expecting! I'm not sure whether that's a good or a bad thing--on the one hand, I gotta applaud you for bucking expectations. On the other hand, it felt like it was lacking some of my favorite things about your past comics.
Expectations aside, there were a few moments that got a good chuckle out of me, and I love that you included Larger Than Life in this XDD
I think a lot of my opinions on this comic are largely personal, and therefore not likely to be overly helpful--but what I will say is that it kinda felt like most of the characters were forced into a role they didn't necessarily fit; it feels like you had a story you wanted to tell, and so you put characters in the roles they needed to be in regardless of whether it fit that character. Like I said earlier, though, that's a really hard balance to strike! Most jarring for me I think was Kurdis--which ended up kind of impacting the twist at the end because it left me going
? like, I have no idea why Kurdis has Smile's mask or why he's doing... basically anything he does. For a twist like that to work, it needs to make *sense*; the reader needs to be able to go "OHHHH why didn't I see that coming earlier!!" as opposed to being like "wait what".
All that aside, you continue to have really fun and creative panel compositions--especially noteworthy in the jailhouse scene with Greece and Jaja! And the last two panels on page 3!!
Expectations aside, there were a few moments that got a good chuckle out of me, and I love that you included Larger Than Life in this XDD
I think a lot of my opinions on this comic are largely personal, and therefore not likely to be overly helpful--but what I will say is that it kinda felt like most of the characters were forced into a role they didn't necessarily fit; it feels like you had a story you wanted to tell, and so you put characters in the roles they needed to be in regardless of whether it fit that character. Like I said earlier, though, that's a really hard balance to strike! Most jarring for me I think was Kurdis--which ended up kind of impacting the twist at the end because it left me going

All that aside, you continue to have really fun and creative panel compositions--especially noteworthy in the jailhouse scene with Greece and Jaja! And the last two panels on page 3!!
Snager:
First things first, I absolutely love everything about page 1 and 2! excellent scene setting, with some truly impressive environmental storytelling details. "Live, Laugh, Leave" especially got me XD You really nailed that post-apocalyptic scavenger town aesthetic so wonderfully, which I'm a big sucker for.
Your banter was also really fun throughout!! it felt fun and bouncy and gave me a few good Sensible Chuckles, lol. You commended me on full coloring, but I've gotta commend *you* for pulling off a limited color palette so well! Half the time I didn't even notice that there were really only a handful of colors used; everything felt so well-placed that it felt natural.
I think my biggest hangup was on a couple of the design choices you made; it took me a little bit to realize who Greece was, because he ends up looking more Gaston-esque with the hairstyle, the shirt, the sideburns, the lack of stubble, and the emphasized adam's apple. It's not a bad thing to do something different with a character's design, it's just sometimes a gamble that they won't end up looking like the character! Gotta admit, putting Jozzik in a onesie also threw me a little XD it was funny and I enjoyed the humor in the end, it just threw me off a bit lmao
Writing-wise, I think you did a really good job of setting up little details and clues! Even though I didn't guess who the real culprit was on the first readthrough, on my second readthrough I was able to go "OH. OH IT WAS STARING ME IN THE FACE THE WHOLE DAMN TIME" lmao!
Your banter was also really fun throughout!! it felt fun and bouncy and gave me a few good Sensible Chuckles, lol. You commended me on full coloring, but I've gotta commend *you* for pulling off a limited color palette so well! Half the time I didn't even notice that there were really only a handful of colors used; everything felt so well-placed that it felt natural.
I think my biggest hangup was on a couple of the design choices you made; it took me a little bit to realize who Greece was, because he ends up looking more Gaston-esque with the hairstyle, the shirt, the sideburns, the lack of stubble, and the emphasized adam's apple. It's not a bad thing to do something different with a character's design, it's just sometimes a gamble that they won't end up looking like the character! Gotta admit, putting Jozzik in a onesie also threw me a little XD it was funny and I enjoyed the humor in the end, it just threw me off a bit lmao
Writing-wise, I think you did a really good job of setting up little details and clues! Even though I didn't guess who the real culprit was on the first readthrough, on my second readthrough I was able to go "OH. OH IT WAS STARING ME IN THE FACE THE WHOLE DAMN TIME" lmao!
Mints:
MAN I loved this so much!! The sheer amount of care that each character felt like they were treated with was incredible, and I loved the overall story, the different challenges, and the ultimate conclusion.
I think my only real critiques are a bit of a nitpick; in the beginning, Cam's pose looks less like he's being thrown backwards and more like he's dancing. Also, I assume that Jozzik's van is essentially driving itself through magic? But I'm not sure on that, and I only realized that after reading a couple times. I think because Jozzik comes out of the back of the van initially, and says *we*, I assumed that someone was actually physically driving the van, so then when it was just Cam and Jozzik in the front I had a moment where I was like 'where'd everyone else go tho??' I'm not entirely sure how to make that any clearer, though, so I'm not sure if that was just me not picking up on context clues or what XDD
My favorite part tho was when Cam got hit by the stake and just went "aw fuck". Mood, buddy. Mood.
Also you drew everyone so pretty what the fuck
I think my only real critiques are a bit of a nitpick; in the beginning, Cam's pose looks less like he's being thrown backwards and more like he's dancing. Also, I assume that Jozzik's van is essentially driving itself through magic? But I'm not sure on that, and I only realized that after reading a couple times. I think because Jozzik comes out of the back of the van initially, and says *we*, I assumed that someone was actually physically driving the van, so then when it was just Cam and Jozzik in the front I had a moment where I was like 'where'd everyone else go tho??' I'm not entirely sure how to make that any clearer, though, so I'm not sure if that was just me not picking up on context clues or what XDD
My favorite part tho was when Cam got hit by the stake and just went "aw fuck". Mood, buddy. Mood.
Also you drew everyone so pretty what the fuck
I'll see if I can reply to some of the comments about mine later, but this post is long enough as is so that'll be Later. For now: Thank you everyone for your comments!! They mean a lot, and they're v helpful! Some good food for thought :3
And thank you again to all five of my fellow artists. This was truly so much fun and these were some excellent comics we done made. I'm proud of all of us!!
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And a HUGE thank-you to everyone whose voted and left comments! I love the feedback!
Snowy- BEAUTIFUL art of course, LOVE your curvy, flowy style. You draw everyone so CUTE and Greece looks so good, thank you for making him handsome~ I worried a little that i overstepped in my comic when I had someone ask Dairyu "if Arma defender, how come apocalypse?" so I'm glad you addressed the same thing- though I agree Kurdis may not have been the right choice for that role. Maybe Greece or Jaja? But on that same note, I can't help but wonder a little about Kurdis' points- she DOESN'T really seem interested in being a leader or taking care of people that aren't her loved ones so I don't completely understand why she decided to at the end. But I love the idea for the Misty Oasis, and I really hope that stays canon no matter who wins. It looks beautiful and peaceful!
Batty- Full colour and everything! You went all out! But more than that I loved the writing- everyone getting trapped in their own nightmares felt so viscerally personal, you did a great job capturing everyone's characters. I really liked Jozzik losing strength and control of his powers as the trials progressed, allowing the nightmare to seep in, but like, what are you gonna do, NOT be fabulous?? I wish I'd seen a little more of the trials but I understand the point was more to the nightmares. Hah! We could almost combine our comics! I did the show and you did the finale lol! Anyways great work, I love seeking Jozzik in this role and hope to see more of him going forward!
Footini- first off i LOVE the character spotlight pages, the art on those were so good. This isn't the comic I expected from you, and honestly I like that! It still had some great humor but there was a much darker story going on. Never even THOUGHT about Greece vs Vidia but now I wish I'd seen that fight lol badass.The idea of painting Kurdis as the surprise villain was a twist I didn't expect but appreciate you doing something different, even if I don't COMPLETELY understand his motivations. He needed to compel Jaja to fight so that she could unify the city? The ending was a bit abrupt so I don't fully understand. Also I gotta say, not super sure I agree with your writing of Greece this time. The man is a lot of things but not a quitter- even from the bottom, he's looking to the top. But I love the Greece and Jaja rematch, the fight scenes were all badass and I like your spotblacks and your expressions!
Snager: Firstly, full trad, hot DAMN, high points for that. I love the environmental shots at the beginning, it really builds a world for the characters. onesie-Jozzik is ADORABLE and i love Jaja's sex appeal but I agree with Batty that Greece doesn't really LOOK like Greece. If there was no text, I never would have guess that was him. I like the mystery aspect of Kurdis trying to sabotage the others and how he's basically only running for the sake of popularity. Dairyu dropping out also felt on-brand for her in light of the situation. The framing device of it being a reality TV show was clever too. I really hope '#Greeceisapeepeeboy" doesn't trend. Does he not have it hard enough already? XD
Mints: Okay. WOW. Like, just... hot DAMN. I don't feel qualified to crit this, I only have glowing praise.The art is beautiful with GORGEOUS inks (as expected from you~) with FANTASTIC environmental work. I love how handsome you made Greece <3 You captured him so WELL. He's troubled by his failures but always striving to do better and never goes down without a fight- especially a physical one =P The squared circle was the best place for Cam to get Greece to LISTEN to him because thats where he's the most HIMSELF so Greece will respect the hell out of him for that (and tell his mom to stop going to that bar lol). I love Dairyu and Jaja's challenge being forcefully ended by Jozzik opening a magic door because Rickter just LET CAM IN, I laughed XD Despite the pages you couldn't finish (understandably), this was incredibly put together, and the best written one in my opinion. Cam as a unifier is a perfect role for him, and having him lead a city council sounds like a perfect compromise. Great work! Highest compliments!