Purple Pain / Sanguine vs. Kiderance 'Kid' Wilde

Purple Pain — Sanguine vs. Kiderance 'Kid' Wilde

by Bobert

This comic has been rated suitable for teens and up by its creator(s)

45.1%
203 points

Crit level: In-depth critique preferred

This comic was a storytelling travesty actually. Because it relied on implicit knowledge of Kiderances backstory that is not expounded or ellaborated upon in the comic verbally but through pure visuals and everything has an almost stream of conscience dream logic to it that some of my acquaintances came to the wrong conclusions about. So this is one of those times where I'm really aching for a proper critique. Especially because my mental stamina isn't completely depleted into the negatives.

tags: monster gore

by Kidlet

This comic has been rated suitable for all ages by its creator(s)

54.9%
247 points

Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques

I tried for a colored comic, but I with a deadline and how long the pages were I went black and white. Still had a lot of fun with this comic. >w<

tags: desert void, Fairy, Funny, kid wilde, kiderance wilde, sanguine, silly

Critiques & Comments

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Fluffsamasprime
Artist

514 comments

# 4 Posted: Feb 9 2023, 03:11 PM

These were both entertaining to read.
Bobert it looks like you've been reading all the comments and taking them to heart. You cleaned up the comic really well. Made the words easy to read, and I can visually follow the story. Keep this up! You're headed in the right direction.

Phb I like your use of the different tones. You drew the characters really cute in your style. Having fun making the comic is the most important part.

DesDemonical
Artist

32 comments

# 3 Posted: Feb 6 2023, 08:02 AM

Haha bobert I still really enjoyed yours even without a lot of context, I felt the final page made me understand the basic idea well enough. I loved seeing Sanguine's outfits and deranged expression

Maybe next time to make it more clear you could just have a page with a quick intro of each character or something establishing the setting a bit? Some context I think would have helped.

halfbreed i really enjoyed the comedy of this! Sanguine throwing a tantrum and getting hit with a muffin is just perfection. Was a delight to read hehe

Kidlet
Artist

3 comments

# 2 Posted: Feb 6 2023, 07:46 AM

I very much enjoyed this comic <3

Got a good chuckle of Sanguine just killing demons and just eating the cake Kid baked.

Kid ain't happy sharing but I guess payment is necessary.

Bobert
Artist