Haha bobert I still really enjoyed yours even without a lot of context, I felt the final page made me understand the basic idea well enough. I loved seeing Sanguine's outfits and deranged expression
Maybe next time to make it more clear you could just have a page with a quick intro of each character or something establishing the setting a bit? Some context I think would have helped.
halfbreed i really enjoyed the comedy of this! Sanguine throwing a tantrum and getting hit with a muffin is just perfection. Was a delight to read hehe
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# 3
Posted:
Feb 6 2023, 08:02 AM
# 2
Posted:
Feb 6 2023, 07:46 AM
I very much enjoyed this comic <3
Got a good chuckle of Sanguine just killing demons and just eating the cake Kid baked.
Kid ain't happy sharing but I guess payment is necessary.
Got a good chuckle of Sanguine just killing demons and just eating the cake Kid baked.
Kid ain't happy sharing but I guess payment is necessary.
# 1
Posted:
Feb 6 2023, 07:09 AM
This was good. Thank you.... Now I gotta collapse to the floor in exhaustion...
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
3 weeks + 1
Ended:
Feb 13th, 2023
Votes Cast:
12
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601
Winner:
Kidlet
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Bobert it looks like you've been reading all the comments and taking them to heart. You cleaned up the comic really well. Made the words easy to read, and I can visually follow the story. Keep this up! You're headed in the right direction.
Phb I like your use of the different tones. You drew the characters really cute in your style. Having fun making the comic is the most important part.