Oblivia vs. HR99

Oblivia vs. HR99

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Fluffsamasprime
Artist
570 comments
# 5   Posted: Feb 18 2023, 10:58 AM
These were both fun reads! I enjoyed the humor in both.
The awkwardness of the 69 joke in Marrion's and the hunt for the prized plushie in Pizza's

Badger
Think Tank
67 comments
# 4   Posted: Feb 18 2023, 12:13 AM
Marrionberrypi- alright, this one got a legit laugh out of me lol. The awkward and long pauses, and 69's complete confusion, work really well here! for crit-- I recommend ensuring that your lighting setup is really good when you take pictures; the actual resolution quality of these is good, but I think if you put up some extra lights you could reduce the shadows you're getting on the page. (Ideally, an ambient light, such as indirect sunlight, works really well for art pics). Good comic!

Pizza man- Really enjoying the lighthearted tone here, the jokes were also pretty creative and got me a few times too! 24 cheating to get the plushies is a fun twist.  I'd recommend giving the backgrounds a bit more room, especially on scene transitions; the camera feels like it's often very close to the characters. If you mix in some more wide shots, it'll add some extra spice to your paneling and reinforce where the characters are standing more. It looks like you're using color to establish location (purple for the interior, cyan for outside) and I think that's a good touch which does help address this concern. Good stuff, I always enjoy your humor!

Pizza Man
Artist
79 comments
# 3   Posted: Feb 14 2023, 09:08 AM
OOOOOOO Berry I love how you draw 69...the robot! I love his interaction with Oblivia too it was an all around pleasant comic to read. Ty for the fight!

DesDemonical
Artist
45 comments
# 2   Posted: Feb 14 2023, 05:51 AM
marrionberrypi- HA! that central joke and their ensuing convo was so awkward, i loved that 69 didn't actually know what joke they were making

pizza man- i loved their central plushy conflict. The no robots sign made me laugh

Bobert
Artist
250 comments
# 1   Posted: Feb 14 2023, 03:20 AM
Well done for completing the comics. My only critique isn't even really a critique and more just saying that you gotta clock in more time in drawing (we all do obviously), because otherwise these comics are not bad. You both set out to tell the short and humorous stories you wanted to tell and you nailed that. Keep drawing you guys!

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Drawing Time: 4 weeks + 1
Ended: Feb 21st, 2023
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