Pizza, you know I'm a sucker for 'the cursed tv shows you watch when you're asleep.' and you hit the nail on the head. the answer being 'i'm slowly being fused to the floor' had me gafah. the choice in unsettling pink was also tops. very dense series of interactions and events yet you kept it to just 4 panels per page and the information flowed very easily. you should be teaching me this >:U

Null, I can tell you were going for a sweet and simple story. you have a habit of zooming in on objects and scenes and giving everything thick chunky lines so it's harder to tell what is closest and get a sense of depth. this affect should be saved for emotional close ups on body language and expressions, then you shall need to find a way to represent objects that are in the mid, far, and back ground. example: on page two, the second panel where their characters bottoms of their faces are visible only. why would you want to hide their eyebrows from us? part of their eyes are hidden too, which is the best way we have to tell the characters apart. a craftsmanship problem too: the word bubbles underwent meiosis on page 2.
just some thing to think about while you develop and hone your style.
I appreciate that you didn't try to go too big with your first 24 hour battle! everything looks evenly polished and you picked a short and sweet story for just 3 pages. very smart!