Gone / Bruno Ledoux

Gone — Bruno Ledoux

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This follows Bruno’s past comics with Oleander. The lionhearts lost a brother and did funerals for him. Just thought about making a comic about it!^^
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Firefly
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42 comments
# 6   Posted: Nov 6 2022, 02:13 PM
Even without knowing the context of the characters in this I could feel the emotion. The blue backgrounds were also very nice and the ending was sweet after a somber beginning.

Fluffsamasprime
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499 comments
# 5   Posted: Nov 6 2022, 11:39 AM
YES!! MORE BRUNO!! AND WE FINALLY GET TO SEE HIS BO!!
Theres a lot of emotion packed into this!

Bobert
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138 comments
# 4   Posted: Nov 6 2022, 01:06 AM
While I have not kept up with every Oleander comic too closely and thus have a limited frame of reference, this was still a nice comic touching on a lot of the pains surrounding a persons death and how someone would deal with it.

Attending funerals and gatherings to honour those who passed away can be so emotionally taxing. So showing a positive in Bruno's life to numb the turmoil is nice.

IItherockmanII
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93 comments
# 3   Posted: Nov 5 2022, 06:30 PM
Very good shades of blue thru the comic Durian! Liked the theme here, and the interactions between Bruno and the others.

PutridVodka
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177 comments
# 2   Posted: Nov 4 2022, 04:23 AM
The mood in this one is heavy and gloomy- the expresisons, body language and dialogue portray Bruno's friend beatuifully. Not to mention, that the entire comic is in shades of blue. A very sweet ending to such a heavy topic. I really love the way you draw muscles. And that motorcycle? wow!

Incredible job, Durian!

snager
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394 comments
# 1   Posted: Nov 3 2022, 10:28 AM
That was quite good. I was able to get into the story without having to go remind myself of any old bruno backlog or anything. there is a bit of an open ended question left hanging in the air if Bruno is going to go after his brother's killers. it's nice drama to see a family member mad at him for something that wasn't his fault and nice to see a character smart enough to not let themself be bullied. but I get the feeling Bruno still feels responsible. but maybe is too good of a good guy to believe in vengeance. I was already here for all that, then you give him a supportive boyfriend , on a bike you actually drew with, like, your hands? nice. and he's pretty. Bruno is pretty and deserves a hot and nice boyfriend. this is the moral of the story (besides the family drama intrigue of course). and they both deserve a hand-drawn motorcycle.

style wise, i'm enamored with monotone comics lately and your linework and shading style all blend in so well together!

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