6ft Under and I wanna fight! / Crush Amethyst vs. Sanguine

6ft Under and I wanna fight! — Crush Amethyst vs. Sanguine

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167 points
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Crit level: No preference
Of course, I would try a new thing when I was already on the wire in the first place. Is 'done'... no not really. but the bits that are closest to done, I'm pretty happy about. Going to explore this style more in the future.
Note: The color bits are 'hardlight' layer style with the opacity dropped just a little. I kinda like the feel where I made it work.
tags: Headless


by Bobert

This comic has been rated suitable for teens and up by its creator(s)

Icon for Sanguine47.6%
152 points
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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
Please be gentle, my wrist began aching up one day before the deadline aaaa.

Big fat thank you to Pepper for all the extensions, this comic would have sucked more without them.
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Fluffsamasprime
Artist
499 comments
# 6   Posted: Jan 21 2023, 11:46 AM
Bobbert- I see more and more improvement in your comics. You have more backgrounds and full bodies going on in them. Test is still a little tough to read, but you are getting there!

SPepper- Page 3 and 4 are so nice! 3 shows so well how intimidating Crush is, and the slice on the 4th right down the middle of the page is fantastic. Shame it couldn't be a bit more polished, but time is a fickle bitch. I think this new thing works really well in your style!

Firefly
Artist
42 comments
# 5   Posted: Dec 17 2022, 01:13 PM
Strawberry pepper: The action and energy of your comic was really good! I also love the humor of Crush popping up from the rubble ready to fight from the dead.

Bobert: I loved your Inks! Every panel was really detailed and pretty and the action was portrayed well too.

PutridVodka
Artist
177 comments
# 4   Posted: Dec 16 2022, 02:19 PM
STRAWBERRY PEPPER- Wow, the art and anatomy is incredible! Even the unfinished pages, the action is pretty readable and enjoyable. Love the palette you used for this! The fight scenes were such a treat for the eyes, lovely work!

BOBERT - I love Sanguine's wardrobe so bad! Seeing a traditional comic in Void is always so nice to see- your inking was pretty good too! I can't really read the dialogue very well so I'm not sure what they are saying most of the time; but the visuals are damn interesting! Really loved the background on the second panel in page 9

Strawberry Pepper
Artist
24 comments
# 3   Posted: Dec 13 2022, 12:02 AM
Of course, I would try a new thing when I was already on the wire in the first place. Is 'done'... no not really. but the bits that are closest to done, I'm pretty happy about. Going to explore this style more in the future.
Note: The color bits are 'hardlight' layer style with the opacity dropped just a little. I kinda like the feel where I made it work.

Ultimately, I just hope it makes sense...

Deepest regret: not planning the actual dialog. spent a while trying to get angles right (there were more sketches then what you can see in the messier pages), so proper scripting kinda ended up being the last thing. ^_^;;

Bobert
Artist
138 comments
# 2   Posted: Dec 12 2022, 08:44 PM
Life decided to play a cruel joke on me by giving me wrist pains the day before the final day of the deadline, making cleanup really difficult to do. Was really looking forward to having this one as a polished piece. It's an understatement how upset this makes me.

kubo
Artist
148 comments
# 1   Posted: Nov 26 2022, 12:42 PM
Back from the dead!

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