Zhanic Hanalei vs. Count Burmeister

by Heavenbat

This comic has been rated suitable for all ages by its creator(s)

53.6%
214 points

Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques

bonus points to anyone who can correctly guess the major inspirations I used here lmao. also I lowkey ran out of steam towards the end and then my computer crashed so I just gave up on shading for the last three pages whoops.
Tried a more simplified, cartoony style. I'm still getting used to it tho
the skeleton with the knives is named Harold btw

tags: adventure, comedy, count burmeister, half orc, in which zhanic is the himbo to end all himbos, orc, vampire, zhanic, zhanic hanalei

by Pizza Man

This comic has not been rated; viewer discretion advised.

46.4%
185 points

Crit level: No preference

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Fluffsamasprime
Artist

499 comments

# 7 Posted: Jan 21 2023, 11:52 AM

Batty- fantastic job all around, lovely colors, polished very nicely!

Pizza- The cooking plot was a very interesting set up, loved the energy of the characters!

Gregly
Artist

187 comments

# 6 Posted: Dec 18 2022, 01:29 PM

Heavenbat- the more simplified style looks great especially since you were able to color and shade the whole thing. the spooky temple adventure was pretty fun, nice work!

Pizza Man- Funny stuff, I like the count's hawaiian shirt and the quickly escalating cooking montage. Also clever to have Zhanic's thoughts not have a lisp, makes sense. I like the body language in this!

PutridVodka
Artist

177 comments

# 5 Posted: Dec 16 2022, 01:58 PM

HEAVENBAT - That was such a damn fun read! The adventures with those two were a delight, the coloring and shading were damn good! The begining of the comic immediately had me invested in what was gonna happen! Zhanic is such a sweet and funny character, I really enjoy watching him interact with anyone he comes accross with! The scar was very positive too, something I don't see too often at all! Great job!!

PIZZA MAN - The cooking montage was such a clever and creative way to go! It was hilarious how the Count just casually slipped in that whole ritual thing out of nowhere lmaoo. Really loved the dialogue!

Firefly
Artist

42 comments

# 4 Posted: Dec 13 2022, 01:45 PM

Batty - The Indiana Jones like adventure was really fun. Your backgrounds all looked really nice too! I admire your background skills. And the scar was fun. Good for Count Burmeister.

Pizza Man - Your dialogue is fun to read. It was comedic and I liked the cooking plot. The scar was dramatic and creative. Good luck to Zhanic looks like he got more than he bargained for.