Zhanic Hanalei vs. Count Burmeister

Zhanic Hanalei vs. Count Burmeister

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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
bonus points to anyone who can correctly guess the major inspirations I used here lmao. also I lowkey ran out of steam towards the end and then my computer crashed so I just gave up on shading for the last three pages whoops.
Tried a more simplified, cartoony style. I'm still getting used to it tho
the skeleton with the knives is named Harold btw
tags: adventure, comedy, count burmeister, half orc, in which zhanic is the himbo to end all himbos, orc, vampire, zhanic, zhanic hanalei

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# 7   Posted: Jan 21 2023, 11:52 AM
Batty- fantastic job all around, lovely colors, polished very nicely!

Pizza- The cooking plot was a very interesting set up, loved the energy of the characters!

# 6   Posted: Dec 18 2022, 01:29 PM
Heavenbat- the more simplified style looks great especially since you were able to color and shade the whole thing. the spooky temple adventure was pretty fun, nice work!

Pizza Man- Funny stuff, I like the count's hawaiian shirt and the quickly escalating cooking montage. Also clever to have Zhanic's thoughts not have a lisp, makes sense. I like the body language in this!

# 5   Posted: Dec 16 2022, 01:58 PM
HEAVENBAT - That was such a damn fun read! The adventures with those two were a delight, the coloring and shading were damn good! The begining of the comic immediately had me invested in what was gonna happen! Zhanic is such a sweet and funny character, I really enjoy watching him interact with anyone he comes accross with! The scar was very positive too, something I don't see too often at all! Great job!!

PIZZA MAN - The cooking montage was such a clever and creative way to go! It was hilarious how the Count just casually slipped in that whole ritual thing out of nowhere lmaoo. Really loved the dialogue!

# 4   Posted: Dec 13 2022, 01:45 PM
Batty - The Indiana Jones like adventure was really fun. Your backgrounds all looked really nice too! I admire your background skills. And the scar was fun. Good for Count Burmeister.

Pizza Man - Your dialogue is fun to read. It was comedic and I liked the cooking plot. The scar was dramatic and creative. Good luck to Zhanic looks like he got more than he bargained for.

# 3   Posted: Dec 12 2022, 09:35 PM
Cool scars! If either of you win it's gonna be cool.

# 2   Posted: Dec 12 2022, 08:22 AM
Heavenbat!: I know the reference! It's Skyrim! Pretty cool comic dude.

Pizza: I liked the cooking plot!

# 1   Posted: Nov 26 2022, 12:40 PM
Can't wait to see how this turns out!

Comic Details -

Scar Match
Drawing Time: 4 weeks + 2
Ended: Dec 19th, 2022
Votes Cast: 10
Page Views: 310
Winner: Heavenbat

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