Intro Story / Kamari Heart

Intro Story — Kamari Heart

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RamenBean18
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# 8   Posted: Jul 20 2022, 06:33 AM
Pretty sweet! Love to have glimpses of a character's backstory right off the bat!
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Thanks!! I love starting with a back story! Or working up to it, if the backstory is tragic and dark enough! Thanks for commenting!

RamenBean18
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# 7   Posted: Jul 20 2022, 06:32 AM
Pretty good comic Ramenbean! I liked the story and characters, it was easy to follow. It's been amazing seeing how you get better and better with each comic.
Quote from: IItherockmanII

Thanks so much!!! It’s been a while since I had drawn a comic, but I’m glad to be back! Thanks for commenting! It means so much to me!

RamenBean18
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# 6   Posted: Jul 20 2022, 06:31 AM
It was a short and sweet comic. You showed off everything you wanted to communicate and that's nice. (You should make Archer a separate character, he looks cool not gonna lie)
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He would be my 8th character on the site 😂 I will have to think about that, lol. It would be awesome! Thanks for the comment! ❤️

RamenBean18
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67 comments
# 5   Posted: Jul 20 2022, 06:29 AM
Your skills are improving! Very nice use of colors through to help set the moods.
I was confused on the last page as to who the lady was. I thought she might have been the granny from page 2 which confused me a bit more cause of the change in personality.
It feels like you're getting more and more comfortable.  
The hand shot on page 3 panel 10 is so very nice! Always appreciate good hands!
Quote from: Fluffsamasprime

Yes it is the grandma, it’s been ten years later since page two, so I get why it’s confusing, don’t worry, there will be a later comic explaining that, thank you for bringing it up, and thanks for commenting! Yes page 3 panel 10 is good but page 3 last panel are my favorite hands 😂

PutridVodka
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164 comments
# 4   Posted: Jul 19 2022, 04:41 PM
Pretty sweet! Love to have glimpses of a character's backstory right off the bat!

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
453 comments
# 3   Posted: Jul 19 2022, 02:15 PM
Your skills are improving! Very nice use of colors through to help set the moods.
I was confused on the last page as to who the lady was. I thought she might have been the granny from page 2 which confused me a bit more cause of the change in personality.
It feels like you're getting more and more comfortable.  
The hand shot on page 3 panel 10 is so very nice! Always appreciate good hands!

Bobert
Artist
96 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 18 2022, 04:16 AM
It was a short and sweet comic. You showed off everything you wanted to communicate and that's nice. (You should make Archer a separate character, he looks cool not gonna lie)

IItherockmanII
Artist
73 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 17 2022, 09:06 PM
Pretty good comic Ramenbean! I liked the story and characters, it was easy to follow. It's been amazing seeing how you get better and better with each comic.

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