War for Rayuba! Round 5: / Selevan

War for Rayuba! Round 5: — Selevan

by Selevan

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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
This was my entry for the 5th round for W4R, I still really like it so I decided to share it here as well!
It was a deathmatch, and my character is the big slab of meat with teeth, the Headless Hunter
Enjoy!
[the resizing made it a lil crispy I'M SORRY]
tags: death, Disturbing imagery, gore/violence




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Juxta
Artist
40 comments
# 6   Posted: Jul 16 2022, 09:44 PM
Your line work is so dynamic and that SFX is so VISCERAL!!! Awesome battle comic Selevan, seemed like it was fun to create!!!

PutridVodka
Artist
164 comments
# 5   Posted: Jul 12 2022, 09:03 PM
Lovely inks and creatures! Page 5 was my favorite, the bottom panel was absolutely divine!

Snowy
Artist
184 comments
# 4   Posted: Jul 12 2022, 08:18 PM
I love how you draw creatures, and the action is really fun to look at! I think you could work a little bit more on speech bubbles, words either look crowded, or that they're floating in gaps of nothing, but this is a nice comic regardless! I'd love to see more!

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
453 comments
# 3   Posted: Jul 12 2022, 02:03 PM
This was really interesting.
I really love the cover you did for this. The trippy colors.
The quality was a little bit all over the place, but you get get all these nice action shots through out, and the details on page 6.
I think my favorite thing is the bears face on page 10. Such a haunted look

Selevan
Artist
7 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 9 2022, 09:10 AM
War For Roomba Harrison sure did have a neat gimmick to his immortality where his head needed to be together with his original body to function or else it'd turn into the screwed up monster thing you introduced in round 5. Maybe you should expand on the concept more now that you're not constrained by Murder 6 Milliard Fiends ruleset.
Quote from: Bobert
Haha yeah I hope I will get more chances to do so!

Bobert
Artist
96 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 9 2022, 08:51 AM
War For Roomba Harrison sure did have a neat gimmick to his immortality where his head needed to be together with his original body to function or else it'd turn into the screwed up monster thing you introduced in round 5. Maybe you should expand on the concept more now that you're not constrained by Murder 6 Milliard Fiends ruleset.

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