EGG SITTING / PineCone
Critiques & Comments
# 6
Posted:
Jun 29 2022, 04:34 PM
Very cute!
# 5
Posted:
Jun 26 2022, 10:11 PM
This was cute, but like everyone said it's a bit short and the story's not all that clear. Is this meant to set up something else for Pinecone in the long run?
# 4
Posted:
Jun 26 2022, 09:06 AM
Short and sweet!
# 3
Posted:
Jun 25 2022, 11:17 AM
Very cute, but with one page and no word bubbles I would have liked to see some color.
I did spot where you said you just wanted to do a short comic, still this would have been a good excuse for some creative stretching with sound effects or spot blacks.
Keep comicing! I wanna see more Pincone!
I did spot where you said you just wanted to do a short comic, still this would have been a good excuse for some creative stretching with sound effects or spot blacks.
Keep comicing! I wanna see more Pincone!
# 2
Posted:
Jun 22 2022, 08:11 PM
I agree this was cute but too short and rushed but there's always future comics for you to show more ideas.
# 1
Posted:
Jun 22 2022, 01:51 PM
Very cute, I wish there was a little bit more to the story though, it just feels very fast paced. It's nice to see more comics from you!
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Lines are solid and the paneling is done well. Keep up the good work Ramen