Quicksilver vs. Jerin

Quicksilver vs. Jerin

by Bobert

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Platinumartist
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# 6   Posted: Jun 20 2022, 08:25 PM
I understand that life gets in the way Obergoat, maybe next time

Bobert: I see tons of potential and I do like the Angelic vib of your character and his wisdom he provides to others. If I can offer a bit of advice, I feel that you might wanna work on your Backgrounds a bit. I get that it can be quite time consuming but background in comics need not be too complicated, maybe at times besides just a standard medium shot of the character, you can do up shots and down shots so you can show the Corners of the rooms (cause you don't want your characters standing in nothingness). I only say this cause that tends to get hit quite hard in the Quality department for some folks.Also! Another thing I did enjoy was the transformation part of Quicksilver going into his more Angel form, that part was pretty well done.

I really hope to see more from you guys in the near future!!! I'm rootin' for ya both!

Fluffsamasprime
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# 5   Posted: Jun 4 2022, 10:19 AM
Bummer Obergoat didn't upload.
Nice to see some comic work from you Bobert! Keep it up!

plask!
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# 4   Posted: Jun 2 2022, 08:34 AM
I was wondering- was the compression/stretching of the font in the third panel a stylistic choice or unintentional? It makes it rather hard to read, but rather energetic as well. Given the relatively calm-reading dialogue, it does feel a bit clashing and difficult to read- at least to me. Looks great, though!

Bobert
Artist
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# 3   Posted: Jun 2 2022, 07:47 AM
I knew you were busy and that life was getting in the way of you getting things done properly, Ober. I hope we can fight again properly in the future and you're not hampered down.

As for you Bobert, you slackjawed, candy-ass, unproductive nancy boy. Why did you alternate between brush pens!? Why did you not use fineliners that were more rigid to ink the panels and not have them be wonky!? Why did you not give Quicksilver a frillier outfit!? Why piss 2.0!? You bastard you make me sick!!!!! Why only 6 pages in 5 weeks time!? Coulda shoulda done more! Why stop at only one or two backgrounds now that you slightly understand 2-point perspective!? You egg sucking nerd! Coulda used more reference! Coulda used more storytelling structure and better conflict resolution! You fail-upwards jabroni!

(This was written as a joke but it gives a glimpse into what might go in my head at my worst, haha)

OberGoat
Artist
50 comments
# 2   Posted: Jun 2 2022, 07:41 AM
Aahh! I completely lost track of time and for some reason thought the deadline was Friday! I am so sorry Bobert! I'll try to see if I can finish up my side of the battle soon and post it as a beyond battle.

DigitalJunkFood
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9 comments
# 1   Posted: May 2 2022, 02:44 PM
Push past your limits!!!!

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Drawing Time: 4 weeks
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