Ancient Fire / Viro vs. Leonore Phyre

Ancient Fire — Viro vs. Leonore Phyre

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187 points
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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
Originally This was just gonna be in Black and White but seeing as we got an extension, I challenged myself to get it colored. I wasn't doing too much with Viro's story so hopefully this pushes it along a bit. Even though it is just a short story, Enjoy!
tags: epic fight, Fashion Police, fight, leonore phyre, magical girl, viro

This comic has not been rated; viewer discretion advised.

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150 points
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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
More experience but a long way to go hope you like it happy reading

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# 6   Posted: May 10 2022, 05:46 PM
I want to thank everyone who took time to read, vote and even comment. It really means a lot and I hope you guys look forward towards more stories of both Viro and Leonore Phyre

# 5   Posted: May 7 2022, 11:32 AM
Awesome job guys! Love seeing people taking on the newbies!

Plat: Loved seeing you dip into different effects.

Drakkon: Little rough, but I'm loving the potential you're bringing

# 4   Posted: May 4 2022, 04:17 PM
Platinum: A nice display of Viro's wits, cerebral fighters need more space in this city. Liked the foreshadowing at the end.
LordDrakon: Nice Lil shonen feeling fight, your influences are evident, in time when you find your style keeping that level of dynamism in your fight will do you great.

# 3   Posted: May 4 2022, 03:24 AM
I'm just hoping to see more of either characters story unravel, so I want to see the outcome of this fight and what direction both Viro and Leo will go towards.

# 2   Posted: May 3 2022, 06:15 PM
PLAT! Nice linework, and the effects are pretty good too! I like that Viro destroys her opponent in acid but i think the effect would have been better if when he realizes it isnt water you SHOWED his skin dissolving somewhat, a little melty gore, maybe some screams of pain. The action is... a TAD stiff. Theres no hit sparks or speed lines, the blows seem to lack impact. Good work on the landscaping though, I had a pretty good feel of their location.

DRAK! Looks like you need to find your voice a bit, you lean a little hard on Toriyama style. Its okay to have influences in your art! But absorb some other influences as well, and some references. I look forward to seeing where you go with your style, you have a lot of flat lines and sharp angles that i think you could utilize for something really dynamic. Keep at it! I sense a lot of great potential in you!

# 1   Posted: May 2 2022, 02:19 PM
Looking forward to this one guys! Put on a good show

Comic Details -

Regular Match
Drawing Time: 2 weeks + 1
Ended: May 10th, 2022
Votes Cast: 11
Page Views: 521
Winner: Platinumartist

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